fic: let me breathe in the moments i won't let go of

[jackfrosted]

Harry/Louis
4110 words
PG

Harry has always loved winter, and it seems that winter has always loved Harry, too. (or, a sort-of Rise of the Guardians AU in which Louis is Jack Frost and Harry is his first believer in a long, long time.)

I don't own 1D, or anything to do with the Rise of the Guardians movie or books. Title is from Drowning by Conor

Comments

[christinchen]

aww, that was so cute! thanks for writing :)

[mozarts_piano]

so this was the most brilliant thing ever written, ever basically.

i am so obsessed with this i literally needed to take a minute there at the end because oh my goodness.

oh my goodness.

so first of all you captured harry wonderfully because he's cheeky and funny but also sweet and confused a lot and just generally a lovely person, so good on you. i feel like people are afraid of writing harry funny sometimes so this:

“What was that?” Liam asks once he has recovered the use of his jaw.

“A snowball, Liam, do you need me to explain that too, or -”

made me very happy as well as this:

Nature creates some beautiful things, Harry thinks as he stares in wonder at the opaqued window, like snowflakes, and avocado, and Daniel Craig's bum

basically you're the best.

AND THEN LOUIS CAME IN and he was so sweet and light, and he had a very fairy air about him - light on his feet and mysterious that.

the boy gasps and claps his hand over his mouth, eyes wide like he can’t believe that just came out of his mouth.also adorable. very much

[mozarts_piano]

AND THIS HOW COULD I FORGET THIS:

He’s not the only one overcome with social awkwardness in the face of strange boys with lovely faces in his bedroom - not that he’s got - not that he’s - whatever.

HE IS WONDERFUL

[jackfrosted]

thank you so much for the wonderfully lovely comment, i'm glad you liked it! and you've given me a few ideas for the sequel now, so that might be a thing that happens in the future. maybe. if i don't get lazy! :)

[its_a_deal]

oh this was wonderful!!! so adorable :)

[jackfrosted]

oh my god yes please draw some fanart that would be amazing! could you link it here when you're done i'd love to see it!

[jackfrosted]

oh my god i didn't see this comment until now
but it's beautiful i love it so much i just reblogged it then :)

[thediamondskies]

THIS WAS SO CUTE I COULD DIE.

beautiful writing, my dear. <3