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SPN FIC: Eleven Times

Aug 30, 2009 12:33

TITLE: Eleven Times
GENRE: Gen, Angst, Hurt!Dean
CHARACTERS: Dean, Sam, Bobby
WORD COUNT: 2786
TIMELINE: Season 1, after Faith but before Hell House
RATING: PG 13 for language.

SUMMARY:In the middle of a blizzard, trapped inside the car that has been their home since forever, Dean tries not to bleed to death while Sam staggers to some disturbing ( Read more... )

season 1, hurt!dean, comment fic, dean, sam

Comments 20

yacoba August 30 2009, 19:26:05 UTC

awww!!! that was brilliant! I'd never looked at their relationship that way before, that all those near misses might have been part of the reason Sam left. I thought you captured the two of them perfectly in this fic. Wonderfully done!

jackfan2 August 31 2009, 04:24:56 UTC

Thanks! Coming from you, I take that as a HUGE compliment. I mean, your writing is just ... amazing.

adrenalineshots August 30 2009, 20:17:11 UTC

DuDe!! You iz posted! Told you before, but I'll tell you again: great concept, lovely treatment and the most awesome hurt/comfort that a deviant girl could ask for :o) Well done!

jackfan2 August 31 2009, 04:27:24 UTC

You really are the best cheerleader EVAR!!!! And from one deviant (hurt Dean MOAR) girl to another; YAY HURT DEAN!

But you know what? Posting this was a blast. I might get addicted to this. *facepalm* I'm in deep shit.

dawnintheforest August 31 2009, 00:02:21 UTC

Loved it. <3

jackfan2 August 31 2009, 04:28:35 UTC

Thank you for reading and taking the time to let me know.

<3 Back a'cha.

starrylizard August 31 2009, 11:57:29 UTC

awww! \o/

jackfan2 August 31 2009, 16:27:44 UTC

:D Thanks for reading and commenting. I love schmoopy brother scenes, though injured schmoopy brother scenes really do me in.

gaelicspirit August 31 2009, 15:41:17 UTC

Oh, so nicely done! The idea of Sam leaving because he couldn't take how often Dean had been close to death... that really touched me. *sniff*

As a side note... one time, I fell through a glass table. Let's just skip over the facts leading up to the *how* (but I was NOT drunk). Your descriptions of pulling that piece of glass out of Dean's leg... nrrgh. Made me shudder. I had a piece the size of my extended hand sticking out of my leg and my stupid self pulled it out and YEOW! Yeah. Dumb Gaelic. So, good on you for that one. :)

Very sweet and touching -- I look forward to more from you.

PS
It's Zeppelin... one more 'e'.

jackfan2 August 31 2009, 16:26:39 UTC

EEP! You fell through a glass table? Dude, ouch. I cut my ankle up really bad as a teen while swimming in a lake. Had a piece of glass sticking outta my ankle the length of my finger. HUUUURT so yea, I can relate.

Thanks for reading and the heads up on Zepp-E-lin *g* All fixed now.

Oh, and CANNOT WAIT for the update! I'll finally get to read the whole thing!!! SWEET!