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severuslovesme in jack_liz

Fic: Need you like an underwire

Nov 01, 2008 23:18

Title: Need you like an underwire
Authors: yourmomroxxs and severuslovesme
Summary: Jack/Liz/Boobs = OT3
Rating: PG-13. For gratuitous mention of boobs.
Disclaimer: We don't own them. Please don't sue us.
AN: Written for the drabble-thon at thoughtsicles

( Need you like an underwire )

fanfiction, pg13

Comments 7

diana_hawthorne November 2 2008, 05:36:22 UTC

Fantastic job - I absolutely loved it!

anakisa November 2 2008, 11:49:28 UTC

Hahaha, they could totally include this in an episode. Great job!

blienky27 November 2 2008, 23:43:21 UTC

OMG, you guys are so awesome. This is fantastic - I can hear them in my head, which is at once super awesome and kinda creepy. I want this in an episode now!

bredalot November 3 2008, 00:16:19 UTC

Umm, apparently I have weird mild dyslexia, because I read the title as "Like you need an underwire" and was expecting something totally different.

Anyway, awesome. :D They are so much fun, and this definitely sounds like them. You did get the wrong "whose/who's" in the paragraph about Sarah Palin's confidence, but other than that, I have no complaints. Just awesomeness. :D It skips right over the "personal boundaries" line as easily as they do on the show, and I love seeing that.

stop_theworld November 3 2008, 01:33:12 UTC

OH, SO MUCH LOVE. YOU, why do you not write more? And if this is what you two turn out together, I am all for more collaborations.

"Lemon, you call me six times a day, so I really find it hard to believe that there is a subject you have not yammered to me about." LOVE. Also love to the last paragraph, which killed me of LOL, and everything in between!