My Finish-a-thon story, HP/CSI: What Is Truth?

[izhilzha]

Author's Note of Warning: I did not do well with this one. I did a lot of research and backstory stuff, but the actual story stands right now at about 2,300 words, and that's not even 1/5 of the story, I don't think

Comments

[rose_in_shadow]

This is great! More?

The characters seem spot on and the initial weirdness of picturing CSI folks with wands quickly disappeared since you've written them so well. I could hear the actor's voices saying their lines.

Random thought that popped into my mind: would they be likely to run into some pompus ministry person preaching about how whatever they see in the Dept. of Mysteries is Sooper Sekrit (tm)?

[izhilzha]

The characters seem spot on and the initial weirdness of picturing CSI folks with wands quickly disappeared since you've written them so well. I could hear the actor's voices saying their lines.

Yay! I was going for that--kill the weirdness by making it clear these are still our CSI people. :-)

Random thought that popped into my mind: would they be likely to run into some pompus ministry person preaching about how whatever they see in the Dept. of Mysteries is Sooper Sekrit (tm)

*g* That would be telling.

But I certainly wouldn't rule it out.

[kerravonsen]

Cool! You've definitely got to finish this. You really got the atmosphere.

[izhilzha]

Why, thanks. :-) Once I got started, it felt pretty natural, actually. Go figure. I'm definitely planning to finish it--just not quite sure when. :-) [As an aside, I've really been wanting to work on some of my original writing lately, so I may have to limit my ficcing more than I have lately. We'll see. This one is too much fun to let go, though. WAY too much fun. *g*]