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September 08//Black and Gold Theme

Sep 28, 2008 14:29

Title: Heart of Black, Eyes of Gold
Author: minerva_one
Word Count: 291
Genre: Free Verse
Characters: Inu No Taisho/Izayoi
Rating: T, sexual situations

( Heart of Black, Eyes of Gold )

sep 08

Comments 4

anesther_reborn September 29 2008, 13:41:46 UTC

So sweet. I really loved the usage of the theme in the poem, and the imagery was just pretty. :D
Great work!

minerva_one September 29 2008, 14:20:40 UTC

Yay, thank you! XD

landofthekwt September 29 2008, 15:18:53 UTC

Lovely poem. Great imagery. Reveals so much about them and their love. Loved that the General waited for her and that they were finally together.

minerva_one September 29 2008, 15:51:24 UTC

Thanks so much! I am glad you liked it! XD