Home by DawningAurora (Peace and Plenty challenge}

[dawningaurora]

Title:  Home 
Author:  DawningAurora
Rating:  K (for all ages)
Genre:  Drama, romance
Word Count: 251

“Any self-prompt that reminds you to focus on flow not ebb, contributes to your greater sense of abundance.” Sarah Breathnache

Comments

[eggplantlady]

I really like the conversation they have here, and the imagery at the beginning of how Kagome fits into the landscape (literally) of the western lands. Nice job!

[dawningaurora]

The idea behind this was that the lands echo the power of the ruler. It has a borderline sentience that connects with the ruler himself thus forming an invincible line of defence... :)

Any enemy within the Lord's mind is an enemy of the land.. It also makes it easier to monitor his people from within his home.. :) :)

Thank you so much for saying so.... :)
I was worried Sesshomaru seemed too OOC in this.. :)

[marishaten]

Welcome to the community!

I really liked your assimilation of the prompt so beautifully within this piece. I could virtually feel the peace and plenty radiating out of your gorgeous writing. Kudos!

[dawningaurora]

Thank you for the warm welcome!!! :D

This is actually the third version of peace and plenty.. ;P

Thank you..That was sweet of you.. :)

[rickashay1]

What an absolutely perfect way to use this prompt! Wonderfully written and I absolutely adore the mention of Inupapa. What a sweet moment between the two though, peace and the companionship feel was absolutely wonderful. You know how some couples don't feel like companions? This felt like both. So excellent job!

[dawningaurora]

This is my idea of an idyllic romance.. :D
I'm so glad you liked it.. :)
This was based on so many "what if's" and "would be's" that I thought it would seem completely crazy... Thank you for saying so.. :)