Week 119 Entry - Theme: Busy Work

Nov 03, 2007 16:55

Title: Delegation
Author: JRMaxwell
Genres: Humor
Rating: G
Word Count: 250
Warnings: None

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#119 busy work, jrmaxwell

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imported November 3 2007, 21:05:41 UTC
The quest was ninety-five percent boring busy work, and five percent trying not to die.
This made me lol.
Great job :D

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drjmaxwell November 5 2007, 00:52:22 UTC
Thanks a lot. It's my first go with one of these weekly topics, so I'm really glad someone had something nice to say right out of the gate. ;)

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demonlord_lover November 4 2007, 03:26:40 UTC
I pictured Souta in camo, trailing Eri, Yuka, and Ayumi as part of his covert mission. I could so see him getting into the strategy. LOL

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drjmaxwell November 5 2007, 00:50:39 UTC
He's the only one who can do it now. A few years down the road and he'll get arrested for that. ;)

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snow_fall November 4 2007, 06:09:56 UTC
That was great. You built everything up so well. There was such a sense of responsibility. Then real life comes into sharp focus. That was a good laugh. Yep, laughed out loud. ^_^

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drjmaxwell November 5 2007, 00:49:51 UTC
Thanks. I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

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priestess_skye November 5 2007, 22:25:28 UTC
excellent work. several of the lines made me lol and I love the roles you gave everybody. I'd say that's fairly accurate if you were to give each person in the group a specific title.

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drjmaxwell November 7 2007, 03:16:16 UTC
I'm really glad to hear it made you laugh. I'm not used to writing fiction yet, and my academic writing is very dry.

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priestess_skye November 7 2007, 04:15:24 UTC
oh i understand about different styles. I came out of journalism school and writing a news article or copy for a broadcast is very different than fiction. It took some adjustment. Even when I was in school I had difficulties switching back and forth between academic and journalistic and got nailed on several of my papers.

But you did an excellent job!

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drjmaxwell November 10 2007, 01:59:52 UTC
They say to write what you know. I know unfounded arrogance. ;)

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