That was great. You built everything up so well. There was such a sense of responsibility. Then real life comes into sharp focus. That was a good laugh. Yep, laughed out loud. ^_^
excellent work. several of the lines made me lol and I love the roles you gave everybody. I'd say that's fairly accurate if you were to give each person in the group a specific title.
oh i understand about different styles. I came out of journalism school and writing a news article or copy for a broadcast is very different than fiction. It took some adjustment. Even when I was in school I had difficulties switching back and forth between academic and journalistic and got nailed on several of my papers.
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This made me lol.
Great job :D
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But you did an excellent job!
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