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iwrotestuff

Porcelain & Velvet 6/?

Jan 13, 2012 18:26

Title: Porcelain & Velvet 6/?
Rating: NC-17 (series overall)
Word Count: 5,000
Warnings: Parent death, car crash, suicide (first part only), prostitution (entire series)
Summary: For this prompt on the kink meme. "Kurt loses his dad in High School & cannot pay for college. He meets someone who tells him about a high class brothel where he can ( Read more... )

klaine, series: porcelain & velvet, rating: nc-17, prompt fill

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mlleraquel January 14 2012, 00:56:21 UTC

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this was so good omg just everything from the characterizations to the hotness, i just can't even make words work to say

iwrotestuff January 14 2012, 05:31:42 UTC

Aw, thank you, bb! :D I was still wearing the cowl you sent me when I posted it. :D

yangatheart January 14 2012, 02:14:04 UTC

I absolutely love and adore this story and the fact that you've turned something that is usually shown as cheap and tawdry into something gentle and caring but at the same time, hot as hell, just goes to show how good this is.

Love Kurt, love Blaine, think you're amazing for writing this, thanks.

iwrotestuff January 14 2012, 05:34:07 UTC

Oh, thank you! I've had the general feel and progression plotted out since freaking August, so I'm really glad that it's working (at least for one person) as well as I'd hoped. :)

I'm kind of loving both of them through this, too - even if one of them has been a little unpredictable and in need of some serious reining in from time to time. >.>

foranotherworld January 14 2012, 03:15:19 UTC

hrrrrrnnnngggghhhh

that hands scene is possibly one of the hottest things I've read in a long time. it was also so sweet and I just, I love that perfect mix of sexy and sweet in this fic. also, inner conflict, you're doing it right.

iwrotestuff January 14 2012, 05:37:53 UTC

I can not tell a lie; the hands scene is probably my favorite one in this story so far. I don't remember if I told you about it way back when during the ramble where I hashed it all out for you, but I've been looking forward to writing it for ages.

Thanks for the compliment about getting the conflict right - it's been kind of tough getting it to a point that I think works. Almost as tough as getting a grip on Sue, and that's saying something. :/

chinablues January 14 2012, 03:29:57 UTC

Wow.

Yup, after careful consideration, just ... wow.

iwrotestuff January 14 2012, 05:40:36 UTC

I hope that's a good wow! There were more than a couple of things about this part that had me rending my garments and biting my nails. That Sue and Blaine scene alone probably took about half the time I spent working on this. :/

Unrelated, but (in the interest of not having 29739701 conversation threads again - hee!) I went to check my mail today, and there wasn't anything from you yet. I did tell the owner that someone had said they'd sent something on Monday, and he said that he would be sure to give me a call if it didn't arrive until after Tuesday (when it expires and I turn in the keys). :)

chinablues January 14 2012, 13:42:34 UTC

It's a 'good' wow, a 'great' wow, 'exceptional', 'amazing', and 'whew' wow. A 'read it twice and it's just as wonderful' wow. A 'touch of the fingertips' indeed, wow ( ... )

iwrotestuff January 20 2012, 19:45:50 UTC

(Forgive my lateness - eep!)

Kurt is definitely being led to that moment. When it'll come and how it'll come, I hope, are things that will still catch the reader at least a little by surprise.

Sue's been in the business long enough that very little catches her by surprise. It wasn't until she heard Rachel telling someone about how young and attractive Kurt's winning bidder was that she had reason to suspect anything. Career men with obscene amounts of money aren't new to her, but one so young definitely would be. She's got the local law on her payroll, but an angry parent whose son got naughty with the credit cards (in more ways than one) would be a very messy situation that she might not be able to clean up. ;>

(I have so many mountains of headcanon and backstory and not-on-camera stuff for this 'verse, it really isn't funny.)

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whosgotyou January 14 2012, 03:39:34 UTC

I can't believe I just found this. There's so many things I love about this story. I love the nicknames you've given all the characters. I'm happy to see that you've included a larger section of characters. Your imagery is amazing. Can't wait to what else you have planned.

iwrotestuff January 14 2012, 07:33:43 UTC

I'm so glad you're enjoying it! :D One of the first things I decided about it was that I wanted to have a lot of appearances from the other characters, and it's been a lot of fun to try and figure out where they'd fit in. There's a lot left to come, and I'm very excited to see if it plays out as well as I've hoped. :)