This Play Between The Sheets [RPF] (NC-17)
Author: Oddreigh
Title: This Play Between The Sheets (Made To Be Broken 6/10)
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 7,1000
Pairing: Chris/Darren. Kind of. ;)
Warning(s): Domination and submission. Bondage. You have been warned.
Spoilers: Oh dear god, no.
Summary: Chris finds something unexpected while at Darren’s. Darren is mortified, but in ( Read more... )
Title: This Play Between The Sheets (Made To Be Broken 6/10)
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 7,1000
Pairing: Chris/Darren. Kind of. ;)
Warning(s): Domination and submission. Bondage. You have been warned.
Spoilers: Oh dear god, no.
Summary: Chris finds something unexpected while at Darren’s. Darren is mortified, but in ( Read more... )
Yeah, that was pretty much my reaction, once I'd finished writing it.
"I loved everything about the last portion of this chapter. A nice mixture of both hot and slightly sweet. It appears that I noticed before Chris did that Darren had changed his form of address. You did a really good job of making the transition seamless and natural."
Thank you - I was really worried about the smut taking over and overshadowing the ending, so I'm glad that it worked for you. Also glad that more than one person picked up on Darren's shift from "Sir" to "Chris" before Chris did. He's not always the most perceptive, but then again, neither is Darren.
"I'm enjoying this story more than I have any right to :) I look forward to seeing what comes next. It seems you're taking this in an actual relationship direction, which is not what I expected, but I find myself pleasantly surprised. Great work so far!"
Hmmm...I refuse to confirm or deny that that's the direction in which they're headed. There's an awful lot still to come, and I think it's still a bit too early for anyone to predict where things will go.
Glad that you're enjoying it, and I hope you continue to as it develops further. :)
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