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From Being Gone - Chapter 3

Jul 06, 2009 16:42

Title: From Being Gone

Author(s): Lynders11

Fandom: The Hollows

Summary: Rachel leaves for two weeks to attend her brothers wedding and see her mom settled at her new place. What happens when she gets back after spending more time away from Ivy than ever before? This takes place after WWBC, so some spoilers are included

Disclaimer: All characters, and ( Read more... )

Comments 8

anonymous July 7 2009, 02:55:14 UTC

great story, graet chapter, just great

lynders11 July 7 2009, 14:53:44 UTC

Thank you very much.

vjb2006 July 7 2009, 04:54:05 UTC

Glad to see you back continuing this!

lynders11 July 7 2009, 14:54:25 UTC

Glad to be back, i struggled with this one for quite awhile because of something i did in chapter 2.

silasfinch July 7 2009, 05:56:51 UTC

This is lovely and very realistic. Rachel finally growing up and treating Ivy rigiht for a change. Nicely written and paced.

lynders11 July 7 2009, 14:55:18 UTC

Thank you, i was a little worried about the pace and well, this whole chapter in general. Next chapter things pick up a bit.

dear_heart89 July 17 2009, 08:47:22 UTC

wow! I just love how your story is coming along, I can't wait for the next chapter...you're a great writer :)

lynders11 July 18 2009, 20:46:02 UTC

Thanks! I appreciate the feedback.
I hope to have the next couple of chapters up within the week.