the shortcomings of being Moon Jongup

Mar 31, 2013 00:33

Title: the shortcomings of being Moon Jongup
Author: ivoryroyale
Pairing: ot6, slight!Jongup/Zelo, Daehyun/Youngjae, and Yongguk/Himchan
Rating: PG
Genre: hurt/comfort, friendship
Summary: Sometimes Jongup forgets Junhong isn't bulletproof.
Note: for bictory at thebrowniebunch fic exchange! I'm so sorry you got stuck with me. I wasn't sure if you wanted an actual ( Read more... )

genre: hurt/comfort, pairing: jongup/zelo, genre: friendship, fandom: b.a.p, !oneshot

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bictory March 31 2013, 16:34:12 UTC
asdjfkl;dgjkjfsd THE TEASER DESCRIPTION, I had to go to Easter service so that's all I saw of this fic til now, but it was so much perfection even in that one line AHHH, insecure Jonguppie, thinking that people like him for his body ;A; and AHAHA I feel like your Jongup is like my spirit animal or something with the way he's so spacey and forgetful and needing care...and the other guys taking care of him, my poor heart ;A;

I LOVE LOOKING INTO THEIR LIVES, early riser Daehyun being a menace and ugh the pacing is done so well. Poor baby maknae, I can see him taking care of Jongup in order to avoid thinking about himself, and precious Jongup trying and failing to do something for Junhong and asdjfkl; PRECIOUS.

Just in time to see Yongguk shaking his head at Himchan who's holding back Daehyun who's being scolded by Youngjae because of the piece of bacon in his mouth. THIS JUST SEEMS LIKE THE PERFECT DOMESTIC B.A.P SCENE AND I CAN'T HANDLE IT.

Ahahaha, I forgot all my prompts, I'm sorry, they were probably all really bad, but you wrote this one so well!!! I love how Jongup's valiant attempt made Junhong finally open up in the end, and how sometimes some things never change and that's ok >_< thanks for writing this, and what are you talking about, I was lucky to have you as my writer!! ♥

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ivoryroyale April 2 2013, 22:00:51 UTC
;v; i'm so sorry i couldn't get to this until now because of school and crap but thank you so much! you don't know how much it means to me that you actually liked it. ;;;

i love writing about their lives tbh. it's interesting to think about what they do in and out of the dorm. xD daehyun just seems like a menace all day every day. it's like his job or something i swear. i'm glad you thought the pacing was done well. that's like, one of my many problems i think. i write waaay too slow. in my chaptered fic the plot always has hitches because of how slow i pace it. xD

i'm glad you liked my little domestic scenes too, hehe. :) that's how i always imagine b.a.p and i can never handle it tbh.

shh, i loved all of your prompts. it was hard to choose tbh. and thank you so much for reading! you're so nice, omg. ;___; <333

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