not afraid to fall [chapter 20]

Jan 04, 2013 21:55

Title: not afraid to fall [chapter 20]
Author: ivoryroyale
Genre: supernatural, drama, friendship, hurt/comfort, romance
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: language, very brief mentions of bullying and abuse
Summary: in which a group of six aren't afraid to stand tall because they have each other.
Note: 7,626 words. Unbeta-ed.
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member: daehyun, fandom: b.a.p, pairing: zelo/youngjae, !series, member: youngjae, genre: friendship, series: not afraid to fall, member: yongguk, genre: drama, genre: hurt/comfort, member: zelo, genre: supernatural, member: jongup, genre: romance, pairing: daehyun/jongup, member: himchan

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kareoto January 6 2013, 00:01:37 UTC
wow why are you doing this to me ivy! ;__; i wanted to leave a good comment about the entire chapter but fklsdjfd the younglo ;______; i. can't. ugh. i can't stop reading the younglo, i need more! ;______;

“I get cuddles.” And Youngjae doesn’t even feel embarrassed when he admits that he wants them, because he fucking deserves them right now after all that he’s done. “Lots of cuddles.”

youngjae commanding cuddles from junhong is my new headcanon seriously. i'm so in love with this part. actually i'm in love with everything because younglo is perfect and so is your writing. younglo + ivy writing = otp tbh.

i wonder how youngjae will react about junhong falling for him and/or when he realizes he likes junhong, like if he'll have a fight with his brain because junhong is supposed to be his brother and all... i really am looking forward for the development of their relationship~.

and dear god can i just punch daehyun in the face? ugh. poor youngjae.

anyway, thanks for the great chapter! ♥

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ivoryroyale January 6 2013, 00:28:33 UTC
I'm sorry, I didn't mean to, but omg, I felt the exact same way while I was writing it. ;____; Your comment is amazing. It makes me so happy when a YoungLo shipper comments on my story because omg. Big group hug. Party of three, because that's how many YoungLo shippers have commented on my story. lol.

Omg, ikr? That would totally happen irl. Totally. Youngjae would complain about Zelo being too awkward around him during variety shows and he would demand he make up for it in cuddles. Yep yep. I have a lot of YoungLo headcanons okay and no one is ever there to listen to them. xD

We'll just have to find out what happens. xD Wouldn't wanna spoil anything for you. ^^

Oh, I know. But I love adding drama into my story and Daehyun is actually naive enough to do something like that lol

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! <3 Like seriously, I love when YoungLo shippers comment because asdgdasaf. ily.

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kareoto January 6 2013, 01:21:39 UTC
if you felt that way then maybe you should give us some more younglo in the next chapter? just a little bit more? ;__; sobs actually i pray everyday that youngjae will have a mental breakdown and kill everyone except junhong and they'll live happily ever after cough i swear i love everyone in this fic LOL

aw ikr :( our ship is so small but tbh it's good that way, more younglo for us \o/ except the fact that we don't really have much fic to read...

i don't understand zelo, really. he says he doesn't like skinship but he is always trying to touch youngjae. cough. and omg you can start typing down your younglo headcanons already i'm here to listen to them~

♥♥

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ivoryroyale January 6 2013, 02:24:17 UTC
There will probably be YoungLo in every chapter from now on. lol. Because other ivy always complains when there isn't and the only reason why she reads is because of the YoungLo. xD And LOL, that might happen. Maybe. No it won't, lol. But that doesn't mean I don't think about doing it. xD

I know. It's so sad. ;___; that's why I rejoice whenever I see one. xD But yeah. Small ship is very comfy and cute. :3

Omg, all those pics and gifs. x____x //dead from all the cute. How can people not ship them and just say they're awkward? I don't understandd.

Dude, I have soo many headcanons. I can write individual fics of all of them. Which I will do one day. When I have the time. orz I can go on and on for days. But yeah, my favorite one would have to be that the only reason why Zelo said he was awkward with Youngjae is because he's attracted to him and he doesn't want to admit it. And when Youngjae finds out, he kind of just teases and bugs Zelo until he admits it, like "hey. hey. I know you love me. don't deny it." and yeah, that probably ( ... )

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kareoto January 6 2013, 03:04:35 UTC
good! i'll give you cookies everytime you write cute younglo for us. :3

oh well i hope you know that i'm getting a chair and i'll sit here and wait for those fics. :F and yeah, i have that same headcanon. even though their personalities are different and they like to ignore each other i feel like they really could complete each other :c i don't see their relationship as something easy to deal with though. i think they would keep a lot of things unsaid and they would start to suffocate the relationship because of that and everything would get awkward again until one of them finally steps out of his comfort zone and speaks up about what is bothering him. idk does that even make sense?

lol when you want to rant about younglo i'm here~ i love talking about them. :-)

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ivoryroyale January 6 2013, 06:45:48 UTC
I'm going to be getting a lot of cookies then... lol. xD

Hahaha, hopefully I'll get to writing them soon! Idk, I always end up writing the beginnings to all of them and then never getting to the ends. :c Endings are not my forte.

OMG, that is exactly what i think! It makes so much sense and it is so perfect for their personalities! I imagine the two of them wouldn't even say "i love you". I think they'd just jump headfirst into dating without even asking each other out first and it'd be so dysfunctional but so cute and Daehyun and Jongup would totally jump in and do some couple's counseling for them because that's what best friends are for. this is totally one of the stories i have in my mind rn jsyk.

Aww, thank you bb~ ^^ You're so nice! :)

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kareoto January 12 2013, 15:29:57 UTC
(my computer died that's why it took me so long to reply...... orz)

i feel you, i have the same problem. and then there's also dialogues which i hate writing. OTL

omg yes! lmao jongup helping junhong would be hilarious. he probably would start talking a bunch of nonsense that actually only makes sense to himself and junhong would be like "hyung what". lol jsyk now i'm waiting you write this because it's perfect.

and btw did you like the teaser? :3

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ivoryroyale January 12 2013, 20:20:42 UTC
xD don't worry about it. :>

yeah, i agree. dialogues are very problematic, because i always question myself about whether or not they'd actually say what i'm making them say.. orz but idk, reading them aloud usually helps me. xD

he'd probably make all these references to his favorite video games and such. lolol. i will, i swear i will. one dayy.

and omg the teaser. b.a.p is gonna kill me one day, i swear. ;______; of course, i loved it, lol. did you like it? c:

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