Title: not afraid to fall [chapter 5]
Author: ivoryroyale
Genre: supernatural, friendship, drama, suspense
Rating: PG
Summary: in which a group of six aren't afraid to stand tall because they have each other
Note: 3,434 words. Developing unrequited!Daehyun/Youngjae.
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chapter 3] [
chapter 4] [
chapter 5] [
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Right now. Right this minute.
Omg I want to see Daehyun's fluorescent wardrobe. It'd be day-glo overload ◕‿‿◕
And that is quite possibly the most hilarious way to wake anybody up ever.
/don't worry about not liking chapters, you can always edit it into oblivion later :3
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http://29.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m0zmv35DQY1qdiq0uo2_500.jpg
This is what I imagine his wardrobe to look like. All fluorescent-y and clash-y and just amazing looking.
Youngjae thought of it with his super brain. LOL.
It's just I didn't know how to make it better. :/ I was trying to blend the story together but it just came out all choppy and I wanted to make the whole "Dude, guys, Zelo's gone" scene a little better, but everything I typed came out bad to me. -.-
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and then zelo steals it all, yes? Because I cannot with that jumper. lawl.
Awh it's ok, we all get that XD It's just something you have to not let faze you. If you feel you can better it at a later stage then totally go for it! /currently writing the most awkward banghim fic ever. \8D
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Don't forget that stylish fuzzy earmuff thing over his fabulous pink mask. B)
Awkward banghim fic? /so reading it when you post it.
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And how can you say you don't like how the chapter turned out? It's amazing! :D
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Aww, thanks for saying it's amazing. Thanks for reading! ^^
I just think the whole chapter was a bit too choppy and wasn't flowing well enough. >.<
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Yes, it is going to be one sided Youngjae to Daehyun. And yes, I plan to make it sad.
Lol, yes you were! And, phew, that was my goal, to make you forget all about the beginning so that you'd be shocked at the end. Haha.
Your reactions are priceless. xD
I'll update as soon as possible. And thank you for the tip! ^^ I'll try and fix it.
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and i hope zelo doesn't do anything reckless, waiting for next chapter! :D
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Thank you for reading and commenting! :D I'll update as fast as possible! ^^
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And I'm glad that you enjoy it! :) Thank you for reading!! ^^
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