not afraid to fall [chapter 5]

Mar 16, 2012 14:26

Title: not afraid to fall [chapter 5]
Author: ivoryroyale
Genre: supernatural, friendship, drama, suspense
Rating: PG
Summary: in which a group of six aren't afraid to stand tall because they have each other
Note: 3,434 words. Developing unrequited!Daehyun/Youngjae.
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[prologue] [chapter 1] [chapter 2] [chapter 3] [chapter 4] [chapter 5] [chapter 6] [ Read more... )

genre: suspense, !series, member: daehyun, member: youngjae, genre: friendship, series: not afraid to fall, fandom: b.a.p, member: yongguk, genre: drama, member: zelo, genre: supernatural, member: jongup, member: himchan

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shadow_fictions March 16 2012, 21:57:33 UTC
NO ZELO. YOU ARE NOT GOING ANYWHERE ON YOUR OWN. NO. NO. NO. GET BACK THERE NOW.

Right now. Right this minute.

Omg I want to see Daehyun's fluorescent wardrobe. It'd be day-glo overload ◕‿‿◕

And that is quite possibly the most hilarious way to wake anybody up ever.

/don't worry about not liking chapters, you can always edit it into oblivion later :3

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ivoryroyale March 16 2012, 22:07:37 UTC
I imagined Himchan, in my head, saying those first two lines of your comment. xD

http://29.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m0zmv35DQY1qdiq0uo2_500.jpg
This is what I imagine his wardrobe to look like. All fluorescent-y and clash-y and just amazing looking.

Youngjae thought of it with his super brain. LOL.

It's just I didn't know how to make it better. :/ I was trying to blend the story together but it just came out all choppy and I wanted to make the whole "Dude, guys, Zelo's gone" scene a little better, but everything I typed came out bad to me. -.-

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shadow_fictions March 16 2012, 22:34:30 UTC
Himchan is a force to be reckoned with. XD

and then zelo steals it all, yes? Because I cannot with that jumper. lawl.

Awh it's ok, we all get that XD It's just something you have to not let faze you. If you feel you can better it at a later stage then totally go for it! /currently writing the most awkward banghim fic ever. \8D

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ivoryroyale March 16 2012, 22:41:30 UTC
Yes, that he is. He's going to be all "where the hell did my baby go" the next chapter. Lol.

Don't forget that stylish fuzzy earmuff thing over his fabulous pink mask. B)

Awkward banghim fic? /so reading it when you post it.

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his_angel16 March 16 2012, 22:35:49 UTC
Baby Zelo is missing~! :O (Eerily, Warrior just started playing on my iTunes xD). I'm looking forward to the next chapter~~~. :D I'm really liking the whole Daehyun/Youngjae thing. ^o^ It's cute.

And how can you say you don't like how the chapter turned out? It's amazing! :D

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ivoryroyale March 16 2012, 22:43:52 UTC
Whoa, creepy. LOL. I'm glad you're liking the Daehyun/Youngjae! :)

Aww, thanks for saying it's amazing. Thanks for reading! ^^

I just think the whole chapter was a bit too choppy and wasn't flowing well enough. >.<

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chasing_thewind March 16 2012, 23:05:41 UTC
Wah~ Another chapte! Thanks so much, loving this! Okay, now ( ... )

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ivoryroyale March 16 2012, 23:12:44 UTC
Thank you for reading! :)

Yes, it is going to be one sided Youngjae to Daehyun. And yes, I plan to make it sad.

Lol, yes you were! And, phew, that was my goal, to make you forget all about the beginning so that you'd be shocked at the end. Haha.

Your reactions are priceless. xD

I'll update as soon as possible. And thank you for the tip! ^^ I'll try and fix it.

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blurrrylines March 16 2012, 23:13:39 UTC
omgg i love daejae in this! they're adorable ^___^
and i hope zelo doesn't do anything reckless, waiting for next chapter! :D

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ivoryroyale March 16 2012, 23:20:45 UTC
They are! Even if I'm completely loyal to Youngjae/Zelo, I still want to keep writing Daehyun/Youngjae. ;____; They're just too cute.

Thank you for reading and commenting! :D I'll update as fast as possible! ^^

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r_hr_maniac March 16 2012, 23:14:24 UTC
i was going to brave it out and read this story even though i really really love daehyun/youngjae but now you're giving me these bits of it and i think i'll just break down once you start on the jongup/daehyun. ...which is completely irrelevant. i enjoy this story immensly, really ♥

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ivoryroyale March 16 2012, 23:25:27 UTC
So sorry! D: I don't mean for you to break down!

And I'm glad that you enjoy it! :) Thank you for reading!! ^^

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