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not afraid to fall [chapter 2]

Mar 13, 2012 15:17

Title: not afraid to fall [chapter 2]
Author: ivoryroyale
Genre: supernatural, friendship
Rating: PG
Summary: in which a group of six aren't afraid to stand tall because they have each other
Note: 2,835 words. A considerably less suspenseful chapter compared to the previous ones.
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!series, member: daehyun, genre: friendship, series: not afraid to fall, fandom: b.a.p, member: yongguk, genre: supernatural, member: himchan

Comments 26

makeminelime March 13 2012, 22:41:48 UTC

Hey, another update? You're just on a roll! Lol.

I loved it! I thought this was just as lovely as the other parts, even if it, as you said, wasn't as suspenseful as the first chapter. It's nice to see the boys relaxing a bit. ^^

Well, once again, I'm excited to see how the story unfolds. :3

ivoryroyale March 13 2012, 22:52:56 UTC

Lol, I know! I'm surprised I'm finishing each chapter so fast.

Thank you so much! I was worried it wouldn't be as interesting if it weren't as suspenseful. I'm glad you liked it. :D

makeminelime March 13 2012, 23:17:40 UTC

You're welcome! <3

I don't expect it to be suspenseful 100% of the time. The storys needs to build, right? Don't worry, I'd read it anyways even if it was boring. :3

Also, am I the only one who still can't message you? Lol. I feel... dumb. TT_TT

ivoryroyale March 13 2012, 23:22:17 UTC

Aw, don't feel dumb! The site's probably just being stupid.

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shadow_fictions March 13 2012, 22:49:02 UTC

/flails at the domesticity.
THEY'RE SO CUTE.
In this scary mutant world that probably isn't what they're going for but. OH CUTE.

I'm probably going to say this every chapter but it's really good, and urgh. More. 8D

ivoryroyale March 13 2012, 22:58:15 UTC

Aren't they just? Domestic!Banghim ftw. :D haha.

Thanks, i'm glad you liked it. :)

shadow_fictions March 13 2012, 23:00:11 UTC

mummy/daddy otp is totally loveable ♥

you're welcome~ :3

chasing_thewind March 13 2012, 23:39:40 UTC

JOY TO THE WORLD~~~ You updated!!! *joy, joy, joy, joy* nice to see a bit of Daehyun's past, and nice to see a bit of what life is like for Banghim! (Love Banghim, it's so freaking AWESOME.) Ohohohoho, I saw Jongup's name right there~ Who are they looking for, hmm??? GAH this just gets more and more interesting even though it's only the second chapter! You MUST update soon, I INSIST. LOL JK, but seriously, take your time. Quality over quantity after all. But if you can... you know what to do.
Cheers~

ivoryroyale March 13 2012, 23:49:58 UTC

Lol, I remember your comment from my first chapter! Your comments are just amazing. xD Thanks for reading! I'm glad you like it! I'll update as soon as possible. :)

imhappi March 13 2012, 23:40:23 UTC

ASLDFKJWERLKJ checked the B.A.P community before leaving for work, you were still at chapter 1.

Now after coming back from work, I immediately rush to my laptop and there's chapter 2!!

Updating so quickly, I love you T~T now brb reading the story lol;;

imhappi March 13 2012, 23:48:14 UTC

asdfkwjerkljasf omg the yongguk/himchan pairing. It's adorable.
(Is Himchan's power strength..? >.>? Iron grip..? Or was that just a metaphor..? I WANT TO KNOW THEIR POWERS T-T;)
And are they trying to rescue Zelo, who was kidnapped or something..? 8D Throwing out random guesses yay~
ANYWAYS. As I have mentioned before, Yongchan is so cute! 8D
(I cannot call them BangHim..as amusing as it is, I feel so shameful saying that LOL)

Waiting for the next chapter~~ SERIOUSLY I LOVE HOW YOU UPDATE SO QUICKLY. When I read chaptered fanfiction, I get really agitated because I want more but some people take forever putting up the next chapters and I eventually just forget about it. So yes. I AM GRATEFUL. THANK YOU :D

ivoryroyale March 13 2012, 23:58:15 UTC

I plan on mentioning all their powers very soon. ^^

LOL, BangHim. I never noticed that. xD Oh, man, now I'm gonna be giggling everytime I see the name, argh.

I do try to update as fast as possible for you guys. I'm surprised at how fast I'm updating though. At first I was planning to update every few days.

numptysmeg March 14 2012, 00:09:28 UTC

Soo excited for the rest of this!
Yongguk's blatent soft spot for Himchan is adorable and Himchan's pink apron is even cuter.
I'm intrigued to know who they're searching for too

~~<3

ivoryroyale March 14 2012, 00:22:38 UTC

Thanks so much for reading!

Yongguk's just a big softy underneath his tough looking exterior. And Himchan can work the color pink being the stern mother that he is.

I'm glad you like it ^^