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ivorykiss

You Are Red, Violent Red - NC-17 - Kaloe 4b/05

Dec 12, 2006 01:15

You Are Red, Violent Red
4b

( Chloe didn’t know how long she had slept after Clark had took solace in her body, but her thighs were still wet and sticky. Her whole body ached, her head throbbed furiously and she really needed to get to the bathroom before too much longer. )

fic, fic: you are red violent red, kaloe, smut, smallville

Comments 8

lilisullivan December 12 2006, 16:08:30 UTC

Damn, he put the ring back!!!... Well it's a Kaloe story so that might explain it lol
Great job! I love your fic!

ivorykiss December 13 2006, 09:35:58 UTC

Yep! Its the return of the ring. *g*

Thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying! :D

roboticarmy December 14 2006, 16:03:58 UTC

this is a great story. the last four parts...nhhhhh. Oh lordy. Hope i can read the rest.

ivorykiss December 15 2006, 08:43:50 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you're liking so far! And I hope you'll read the rest. :)

suzy87 January 12 2007, 13:32:56 UTC

It's the 1st time that I read a Kaloe story, and this one is pretty good. I don't think that Kal really loves Chloe but there's something there. Update When you can!

ivorykiss January 13 2007, 02:32:41 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked your first Kaloe story. :) I think Clark really loves Chloe, there is an undeniable attraction between them, but Clark is too much of the BDA to do anything about it. Kal would. :)

Again, thanks! I'm glad you liked. :)

blackheart_me September 2 2007, 19:23:16 UTC

gotta agree i would want to see what clark wouldve said without the ring. BUT damn i loved how u described her bruises :)

ivorykiss September 3 2007, 07:29:48 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you likes how I write! :D