Okay okay okay. So now that I'm coherent (enough) to comment.nastylovexJune 29 2009, 03:19:46 UTC
First of all. Ryan. -being totally in love with Brendon's voice in the beginning -aspiring journalist! -going to a shrink (who is, in fact, Gerard. Extra cool points there.) -being a shy OCD nutcase -cracking the shy OCD nutcase shell enough to make friends and heart eyes at Brendon. This Ryan is amazing. Your Brendon. -THE BASSOON. That is so badass you don't even KNOW. -being really chill about letting a random person into his apartment, but then kicking him out when he finds out he's a journalist. -sheet music and instruments everywhere! My dream! -being emo/flirty. Which is great. Your Brendon is about as equally amazing as your Ryan. I find it kind of heartbreaking about the one-sided Jon love. But it did make everything interesting. And the whole Gerard sitting on the floor, barefoot thing- loved it. This Gerard is also awesome. And the Mikey/Pete. Cute! I kind of love the thought of Pete being the overly-sexual boss and adored the little bit about Mikey's glasses. It made me miss them even more. Pre-eye surgery Mikey is the best, imo.
Okay. And the end. Me accidentally reading the very last line didn't do me too much harm. But. THE END. Terrifying. It made me squeak in anticipation. Because I really loved Ryan and Brendon's relationship and how it developed and everything. And how Ryan didn't want to abuse Brendon's trust in him was so sweet. Just. I don't know. It was kind of perfect. The whole thing.
So, yeah. Amazing, as per usual. I loved it. All of it and everything. Two thumbs up. \o/ (woo!)
Re: Okay okay okay. So now that I'm coherent (enough) to comment.ivesia19June 29 2009, 23:34:57 UTC
This comment is epic and wonderful! Just reading over all the things you liked about the story made me squee with happiness - especially the bassoon because Bad Ass. And the pre-eye surgery Mikey. Yum. Thank you so much for such thoughtful feedback! :D
First of all. Ryan.
-being totally in love with Brendon's voice in the beginning
-aspiring journalist!
-going to a shrink (who is, in fact, Gerard. Extra cool points there.)
-being a shy OCD nutcase
-cracking the shy OCD nutcase shell enough to make friends and heart eyes at Brendon.
This Ryan is amazing.
Your Brendon.
-THE BASSOON. That is so badass you don't even KNOW.
-being really chill about letting a random person into his apartment, but then kicking him out when he finds out he's a journalist.
-sheet music and instruments everywhere! My dream!
-being emo/flirty. Which is great.
Your Brendon is about as equally amazing as your Ryan.
I find it kind of heartbreaking about the one-sided Jon love. But it did make everything interesting.
And the whole Gerard sitting on the floor, barefoot thing- loved it. This Gerard is also awesome.
And the Mikey/Pete. Cute! I kind of love the thought of Pete being the overly-sexual boss and adored the little bit about Mikey's glasses. It made me miss them even more. Pre-eye surgery Mikey is the best, imo.
Okay. And the end.
Me accidentally reading the very last line didn't do me too much harm.
But. THE END. Terrifying. It made me squeak in anticipation. Because I really loved Ryan and Brendon's relationship and how it developed and everything. And how Ryan didn't want to abuse Brendon's trust in him was so sweet. Just. I don't know. It was kind of perfect. The whole thing.
So, yeah. Amazing, as per usual. I loved it. All of it and everything. Two thumbs up. \o/ (woo!)
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Just reading over all the things you liked about the story made me squee with happiness - especially the bassoon because Bad Ass.
And the pre-eye surgery Mikey. Yum.
Thank you so much for such thoughtful feedback!
:D
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