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ivesia19

Souls Like the Wheels 1/2

Aug 20, 2008 03:08

Title: Souls Like the Wheels
Author: ivesia19
Rating: R
Pairing: Brendon/Ryan
POV: 3rd limited (Ryan)
Summary: Amnesia fic! When Brendon loses his memory, Ryan clings to what’s left of him.
Disclaimer: The boys belong to themselves (and possibly each other)
Author Notes: Inspired by the relationship of Illyria and Wesley on Angel and this song - ( Read more... )

ryden, fanfiction, patd

Comments 34

emorockkid August 20 2008, 10:13:51 UTC

I am posting the comment in parts, otherwise it is going to be too long and would take to much time to get everything posted ;) I read from beginning until that scene where Spencer and Ryan are sitting in the office of the Doctor, asking if Brendon will ever remember him again ( ... )

ivesia19 August 21 2008, 02:44:30 UTC

I always love your comments, they're so well thought out, so detailed that I always feel like you really became involved in the story (something that makes me feel so happy)

And yes, I do often start my stories with a very calming scene that focuses on just one person, their feelings, their thoughts. I like to try and set the tone through it all, but in this story, that opening scene was particularly difficult because I wanted to show how much Ryan loved Brendon (despite his faults) but have the anxiety of 'hey, where is Brendon ( ... )

joncer_love August 20 2008, 22:18:22 UTC

Oh My God.
I'm not gonna lie, This made me cry.
And this, “You really loved him, didn’t you?”, That broke my heart.
Off to read part two.

ivesia19 August 21 2008, 02:45:50 UTC

I know it's a painful story, I know, but I just had this need in me to write it.
I'm sorry to say that part two isn't much happier, but read away!

neko_newee August 20 2008, 23:58:08 UTC

This is--wow. sad. ack. my first amnesia fic. awesome. *reads part 2*

ivesia19 August 21 2008, 02:46:19 UTC

This amnesia fic called out to me!
yay for part two!

tbsh1972 August 21 2008, 00:36:55 UTC

oh my god.

if my brother wasn't in the room now i would be crying my guts out.

part 2 time.

ivesia19 August 21 2008, 02:46:56 UTC

Aw, go away, brother! Let her feel!

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ivesia19 August 21 2008, 16:40:33 UTC

If this happened in real life.... Oh Lord, I don't know how I would handle it.
I didn't even think about what the fans would do. I was so wrapped up in how lost Ryan would be.
(and I love you so much for getting excited for my posts ♥)