...Have Real Locks (standalone)

Aug 06, 2008 18:11

Title: …Have Real Locks
Author: ivesia19
Rating: R
Pairing: Brendon/Ryan
POV: 3rd limited
Summary: Even now, Brendon can’t help but feel that dizzying rush every time Ryan looks at him, and even though there’s Keltie, he doesn’t want to stop. He can’t stop.
Disclaimer: The boys belong to themselves (and possibly each other)
Author Notes: Sequel to Read more... )

ryden, fanfiction, patd

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starlesscities August 6 2008, 23:01:43 UTC
OH MY GOD, SARA.

srsly?!

how are you going to leave it thereeeeeeeeee. omfg nooo. why cant ryan just admit that all he wants is BRENDON, and not keltie. *shudders* her name gives me shudders.

*sighs*

this was fucking amazing, you're amazing.

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ivesia19 August 7 2008, 15:59:02 UTC
I'm sorry!
The angst pulled me in and I really couldn't think of a way to end it happily (at least not right away)
I might do one from Keltie's POV, but if I do, it'll be in a couple weeks.
Oh, and ♥ to you

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ivesia19 August 7 2008, 16:03:37 UTC
Oh, and I forgot. Thanks for the flashlight prompt.
It worked perfectly with the light imagery that I carried over from "Invisible Fences"
So much fun to work with!
You win!!!

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pleurantnoir August 6 2008, 23:56:23 UTC
And you've done it again.

Speechless.

I love you, jsyk. <3

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ivesia19 August 7 2008, 15:59:55 UTC
Thank you very much :D
Much love to you too, bb ♥

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brandinsbabe August 7 2008, 05:53:19 UTC
oh my god i cant believe you left of there!!!!!!!! lol

this is absolutely fantastic. you write them so well that it just continues to amaze me!

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ivesia19 August 7 2008, 16:01:40 UTC
I toyed with the ending for awhile, but this is what made the most sense...at least with what I wanted to convey.
I'm glad you liked it, and it means a lot to me that you think that it's written well :D

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rock_my_town August 7 2008, 06:41:55 UTC
OMG. this is stunning, i can feel how brendon feels so perfectly. thank you thank you♥

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ivesia19 August 7 2008, 16:02:39 UTC
I'm glad that you got Brendon's feelings out of it. I tried really hard to make his emotions as vibrant as possible.
(and thanks for the prompt) ♥

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music_puppet August 7 2008, 09:08:00 UTC
WHY IS THIS SO SAD ;____;
but beautiful <33

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ivesia19 August 7 2008, 16:04:42 UTC
All the fluff I was putting out just amplified my need for angst. It's a strange, strange world.
But thank you for the comment, and the prompt.
I'm glad that you liked it ♥

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