I'm just gonna be honest here. I'm not an overly emotional person. At all. In fact, I'm pretty stoic usually. But I actually TEARED UP. During the sad bit, when Harry was all sad and Louis felt like poop? Actual tears. In my eyes. One or two may or may not have spilled over. Eff you for that (except I love you and never just never ever stop). And the sex. GOOD. LORD. AL. MIGHTY. it was so good. Just...it was delicious and evrything, and you're the goddess of porn for this alone Idec if you never write porn again in your life, THIS MAKES YOU THE GODDESS. The other boys, I love them too. Louis' character. How you brought in that psychological element, it was good. It was good. Kota approves. Harry's character. ...Can I just say that. That this is my favorite. Like, the D/s, Louis/Harry. This is my ABSOLUTE favorite. I love Harry not liking to make decisions and Louis liking to be in control. Harry desperate to please. Harry desperate to feel Louis' love.Louis desperate to have Harry do things to show he cares.The praise. OH MY GOD THE PUNISHMENTS. The fluff, overload on fluff capacity for my WHOLE ENTIRE HEART. Oh, my heart. Jesu Crista, MY HEART, MAN!!! This IS my favorite now.......This is my favorite, and I will probably be ashamed of how many times I'm sure I'll read this, but Idec because I love this.
Thank you so much. It really means a lot that this made you emotional if you don't usually have that kind of response! Dom!Louis/sub!Harry is my favourite too - hahaha SURPRISE - and it was really interesting to explore the more psychological elements of it, I had all this headcanon about WHY they like it that way, and it's (sadly) quite easy to imagine Louis taking it too far at some point.
Our minds should mate and have children. Yes, I've thought the same things. I like to try to include a little bit of psychology, especially in my Larry fics, because I write so many of them and I feel like it'd be easy, if someone was just reading through them or something, to get characterization confused, yeah? I like to make them at least a little different every time. Yeah man it gave me chills, not even gonna lie.
I'm not an overly emotional person. At all. In fact, I'm pretty stoic usually.
But I actually TEARED UP. During the sad bit, when Harry was all sad and Louis felt like poop? Actual tears. In my eyes. One or two may or may not have spilled over. Eff you for that (except I love you and never just never ever stop).
And the sex. GOOD. LORD. AL. MIGHTY. it was so good. Just...it was delicious and evrything, and you're the goddess of porn for this alone Idec if you never write porn again in your life, THIS MAKES YOU THE GODDESS.
The other boys, I love them too.
Louis' character. How you brought in that psychological element, it was good. It was good. Kota approves.
Harry's character. ...Can I just say that. That this is my favorite. Like, the D/s, Louis/Harry. This is my ABSOLUTE favorite. I love Harry not liking to make decisions and Louis liking to be in control. Harry desperate to please. Harry desperate to feel Louis' love.Louis desperate to have Harry do things to show he cares.The praise. OH MY GOD THE PUNISHMENTS. The fluff, overload on fluff capacity for my WHOLE ENTIRE HEART. Oh, my heart. Jesu Crista, MY HEART, MAN!!!
This IS my favorite now.......This is my favorite, and I will probably be ashamed of how many times I'm sure I'll read this, but Idec because I love this.
I love you.
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So glad you liked this. ♥♥♥
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Yes, I've thought the same things. I like to try to include a little bit of psychology, especially in my Larry fics, because I write so many of them and I feel like it'd be easy, if someone was just reading through them or something, to get characterization confused, yeah? I like to make them at least a little different every time.
Yeah man it gave me chills, not even gonna lie.
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