could make your whole world sweet. harry/louis, nc-17.

Jun 03, 2012 22:30

Title: could make your whole world sweet
Author: likecharity
Pairing: Harry/Louis
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: D/s dynamic
Summary: This is what he likes best, just making Louis happy, attending to his needs. (~1,800 words)
A/N: For this prompt in which Louis is preoccupied watching a football match on TV while Harry sucks him off. Title from 'Mercy' by ( Read more... )

kink: d/s, pairing: harry/louis, rating: nc-17, words: 1-5k

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jtsbbsps_dk June 3 2012, 21:41:17 UTC
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oh dear lord.

just making Louis happy, attending to his needs. hnnnnnnnnnnnnnngh yessssss

Harry reaches out without removing his mouth from Louis's cock, taking the bottle and putting it behind him on the coffee table so it doesn't spill. ksajdfgaksjfgkaf Harry, such and attentive and clever puppy ♥ ♥ ♥

and wiping Louis down first, then his own mouth and hands. always Louis first. my heart.

Urgh, so hot. 'specially when Louis got forceful <33

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likecharity June 3 2012, 21:49:08 UTC
:D Yaaay thank you!!

ALWAYS LOUIS FIRST. THAT IS HOW HARRY'S BRAIN WORKS.

And tbh I wanted to make Louis more forceful because...I'm me, but the prompt wasn't really about that, sadly. GOD there are so many D/s possibilities with this pairing that I just go all starry-eyed thinking about them sometimes. ANYWAY I'm really glad you liked this. ♥

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jtsbbsps_dk June 3 2012, 21:55:04 UTC
you're welcome ^_^

ACCURATE!!!

I APPROVE OF THIS. I say you get inspired by those videos you tweeted earlier today, with a desperate Harry and Lou pushing limits and Harry just whimpering and wanting to be oh so good... <.< >.>

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likecharity June 3 2012, 22:02:07 UTC
I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL but don't worry there's elipie's ignoring prompt as well and I already know that if I manage to write that it is going to end up waaaay longer than this.

♥ I'm glad you liked it, thanks bb! It's interesting 'cause it's not entirely how I see them irl? Like I imagine Harry really wanting Louis's attention as well as wanting to make him happy, but like - it's so hot to imagine him just not even CARING about any of his own needs or anything like that, just about whether Louis is enjoying himself oh godddd

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likecharity June 3 2012, 22:03:19 UTC
YES HE SHOULD I AM IN FAVOUR OF THIS

Thank youuu. ♥

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amisophe June 3 2012, 22:02:50 UTC
ugh UGH SERVICE KINK IS LIKE MY FAVORITE OKAY. one of them. Harry feeling guilty for being louder than the TV, jfc my heart ;_____;

I AM NOT AN INCOHERENT PERSON, I PROMISE. I just. The whole wanting to please well enough to go unnoticed, the casual acceptance of that kind of devotion -- it does things to me.

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likecharity June 3 2012, 22:07:12 UTC
I BARELY EVEN KNEW IT WAS A THING FOR ME UNTIL I READ THE PROMPT AND MY HEART BASICALLY STOPPED

I'm so glad you liked this. ♥

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likecharity June 3 2012, 22:15:30 UTC
In my mind the D/s is barely even undertones anymore IT HAS RUINED THE WAY I VIEW THEIR INTERACTIONS

I'm glad you found this hot even though it went further than you might have expected, thank you for the wows. ♥

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