Today my Heart Swings [Beast]

Oct 24, 2012 11:00


Dongwoon-centric, OT6 POV
PG(?) (!) character death
~1800w
Dongwoon’s going to be gone someday, they know. With the way he holds himself up, his death is near. They don’t anticipate for it, but they wait. It is inevitable.

Remix of of broken fingers and shattered melodies at kpop_ficmix. Beta'ed by Simone <3

First Beast fic I've written in such a long time, and it ( Read more... )

fandom: beast, fic: complete, pairing: ot6, genre: angst, !fanfiction

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its_rayning October 25 2012, 02:03:54 UTC
ok, good night~

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its_rayning October 27 2012, 15:35:42 UTC
It's fine :)

Honestly, the story's not really mine; it's a remix, so I took the storyline from here and made it my own with the ot6 pov, I guess ;; So, I didn't really understand the ending either... Because the original work wasn't clear, and I didn't want to make something up on my own u__u

Thank you <3 I haven't written Beast in a long time so I'm glad you liked this ;____;

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crazy_ryzz October 26 2012, 12:54:34 UTC
.....I HAVE DREAMT ABOUT THIS. THIS IS SO WEIRD I CAN'T. I mean I have dreamt of reading this. Oh God this deja vu feeling ngggggggggh.

BUT. THE STORY. UGUGUGUGU. this is so aljfafhjadfhs that I sob. ;___; And no, I don't have anything smart to say. Except I really liked Doojoon's part nggh.

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its_rayning October 26 2012, 17:12:16 UTC
YOU DREAMT OF DONGWOON DYING...?! ;O;

Thanks bb <3 Of course you liked Doojoon in this :D (I did too.)

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codecs October 27 2012, 04:15:14 UTC
this is lovely ;___; and beautifully written fjkahwkeh and sad hfajkwh but so good
your angst is totally fine! i can't think of the words to describe it, but you set up the atmosphere really well-- i almost felt like i was there, watching it happen

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its_rayning October 27 2012, 15:36:23 UTC
Thank you <3

I'm glad my angst was okay lol ;; I'm not... very good with it, so I struggled with it a lot. Thanks honey <3

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3star4life November 17 2012, 02:54:58 UTC
Wae did I not see this before? WAAAAAAAAAAAEEEEEEEEEEEEEE BABYYYYYYY!!!!! [I had to.]

BB this started off all cute and sweet and I'm like awww they all are mystified by Wooniee and then BOOM! Their lives changed. And then poor Seungie & Junniee!! But at least they got closer now!

They see Dongwoon every week, and he exerts the same aura as the first day. It's uncanny and deep and suffocating, every time they are in the same room as him

No wooniee :(

The rest of the boys gather. They watch Dongwoon play the last notes of Ave Verum Corpus. Even without the chorus, the song is beautiful. Dongwoon is beautiful; he’s in his element. He sits on the chair and plays.

Dongwoon doesn’t smell the smoke slowly blanketing the church in white.
Dongwoon doesn’t notice the shadow lurking at the back while he plays his long-lost lover.
Dongwoon doesn't notice the tears dampening his slender fingers as he finishes off the song.
They boys notice. They don't stop it.
They watch it all end. Wae this so beautiful and sad and I love it ( ... )

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its_rayning November 17 2012, 18:55:58 UTC
adjfejasldfja lol you didn't see this because you didn't expect it, silly! I mean, I haven't written beast fic in such a long time ;____;

If it were my choice, he wouldn't have died ; n; I mean, of course not he's my baby askdjf;al :C but I had to go through with it because it was a remix and I didn't want to change all of it ;;

Thank you bb ;; <3

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3star4life November 18 2012, 04:36:04 UTC
OH WOONIEEE!!!!!! BABY WOONIEEEE! YOU WERE TOO YOUNG AND BEAUTIFUL!!!!!! ;~~~~~~~~~~~~~~;

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