Dongwoon-centric, OT6 POV
PG(?) (!) character death
~1800w
Dongwoon’s going to be gone someday, they know. With the way he holds himself up, his death is near. They don’t anticipate for it, but they wait. It is inevitable.
Remix of
of broken fingers and shattered melodies at
kpop_ficmix. Beta'ed by Simone <3
First Beast fic I've written in such a long time, and it
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Honestly, the story's not really mine; it's a remix, so I took the storyline from here and made it my own with the ot6 pov, I guess ;; So, I didn't really understand the ending either... Because the original work wasn't clear, and I didn't want to make something up on my own u__u
Thank you <3 I haven't written Beast in a long time so I'm glad you liked this ;____;
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BUT. THE STORY. UGUGUGUGU. this is so aljfafhjadfhs that I sob. ;___; And no, I don't have anything smart to say. Except I really liked Doojoon's part nggh.
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Thanks bb <3 Of course you liked Doojoon in this :D (I did too.)
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your angst is totally fine! i can't think of the words to describe it, but you set up the atmosphere really well-- i almost felt like i was there, watching it happen
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I'm glad my angst was okay lol ;; I'm not... very good with it, so I struggled with it a lot. Thanks honey <3
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BB this started off all cute and sweet and I'm like awww they all are mystified by Wooniee and then BOOM! Their lives changed. And then poor Seungie & Junniee!! But at least they got closer now!
They see Dongwoon every week, and he exerts the same aura as the first day. It's uncanny and deep and suffocating, every time they are in the same room as him
No wooniee :(
The rest of the boys gather. They watch Dongwoon play the last notes of Ave Verum Corpus. Even without the chorus, the song is beautiful. Dongwoon is beautiful; he’s in his element. He sits on the chair and plays.
Dongwoon doesn’t smell the smoke slowly blanketing the church in white.
Dongwoon doesn’t notice the shadow lurking at the back while he plays his long-lost lover.
Dongwoon doesn't notice the tears dampening his slender fingers as he finishes off the song.
They boys notice. They don't stop it.
They watch it all end. Wae this so beautiful and sad and I love it ( ... )
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If it were my choice, he wouldn't have died ; n; I mean, of course not he's my baby askdjf;al :C but I had to go through with it because it was a remix and I didn't want to change all of it ;;
Thank you bb ;; <3
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