Sucks Reality Show (one shot)

Oct 20, 2010 07:00

Title : Sucks reality show!
Pairing : HyukHae
Rated : NC-17
Summary : Eunhyuk have a job, job for breaking someone random heart. When he search for the target,he found donghae..

Apparently it was all a trick. )

oneshot, nc-17, hyukhae

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hopeing11 October 20 2010, 19:04:10 UTC
thank you for the spot *HUGS*
sorry for commenting so late though (i was at school)
But this is akfh;najnvaejignaejonaergjn FANTASTICXD♥♥
I love Eunhyuk and how you described him and his hotness
i couldn't stop giggling when hyukie asked hae out when he was busy eating ramen♨
And when they went to their first date and he gave Donghae his jacket<3 that was so sweet and warm tingles spread all over my body^___^
i was busy yelling no when donghae realized that it was all a show and a bit mad at eunhyuk for doing that to him-_- but at least eunhyuk didn't mean it and made them destroy the tape:) and they got back together<3
I see that you've got some little YeWook there and KangTeuk~ me likey<3LOL
hahaha i thought it was so funny how Donghae kept on teasing Hyuk with his kisses until finally he invited him in:):)so naughtyXP
the smex was really hot~ like i have to fan myself Hot:)♡
and i agree with eunhaesherry unnie↓ amazing fics like these especially with Eunhae should have a sequel♡♡ and im so glad that it does even if its a drabble! its going o be so sweet and fluffly and i can't wait for it♡♡ i ♥ this unnie~~!!

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hopeing11 October 20 2010, 19:11:16 UTC
sorry i posted the comment without finishing:p
so those girls at the movies were so rude and mean! how dare they disturbed EunHae's date together?? throwing popcorn and trying to spill soda over donghae-_-#mad
thanksgoodness hyuk didn't pay a single attention to them
he had all his eyes on donghae (and his mouthLOL)
I want to spazz over the YeWook moment there:

“This one really caught his eye, didn’t he?” Yesung murmured. Ryeowook nuzzled his neck lightly.

“You caught mine,” he breathed. “And that worked well.”

AAWWWWW:D

and all those sweet Eunhae moments:)

However, eunhyuk couldn’t repress a smile as he pressed a hand to his lips. donghae’s lips had felt so good on his.

Love that↑
♥♥♥♥

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its_hans October 20 2010, 22:00:52 UTC
wooaa, woa,woaa, take a nice breath dear,u could lacking for oxygen later,there there^^ *pat ur back
i am really touched that u apreciating my work here X'), u even comment twice! lov ya!

hahaha, i like to write down the story where eunhyuk is crazy over donghae,possessive!hyuk would be nice XD. EunHae moment daebakk!

yes i added kangteuk and yewook here, i want to inserting as many as possible suju couple here,but fail for this title,next time i will.
and the girls,ahh, dont mind them, they even didn't have a name (just number,lol)

end for the sequel,yup,it will be have fluffy moment inside,hope it not going to be a fail X(
i am on progress~

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hopeing11 October 21 2010, 19:48:42 UTC
*takes a big breath*
LOL--I tend to do these kind of things whenever I spazz about a really well written fic<3
I love stories with Donghae and Eunhyuk being crazy for each other:)
unnie do you like Top!Hyuk or Top!Hae?? Or do you like both?
I like how you made the girls just numbers:)
serves them right for butting in EunHae's business^@^
Suju ninja couples are awesome (YeWook and KangTeuk FTW!!)

Your sequel will so NOT be a fail. You have great skills in weaving words into an amazing story that keeps readers wanting more<3 Like Me^____^
and I know that I'll love it~
can't wait to read it<3(no pressure though)

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its_hans October 21 2010, 22:33:43 UTC
i'm really a Top!Hyuk addicted XDD,from my bottom heart i give my whole writing skill for HyukHae only (peace ^^v),thats why i do not read a bottom!hyuk fic T.T

hehehe,that was because i didn't want to waste my time for thinking over their name^^
okay, plaese wait for me and sit sweetly until my fic being posted^^

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hopeing11 October 22 2010, 01:04:51 UTC
Same! I write top!Hyuk but sometimes I read some top!Hae too but not as much as top!Hyuk:):)

I'll sit my but on the chair and wait for your fic sequel unnie~
<3<3<3

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