Without You

Feb 25, 2008 01:06

Title: Without You
Author: its_chase
Genre: Angst, AU, Romance, Tragedy
Characters: Michael, Sara
Rating: R
Disclaimer: I. Own. Nothing.
Summary: Michael kills Sara.

He’s so blinded by the harsh lighting that he hardly feels her mouth against his bare skin. Hardly feels her suck his nipple into her inviting mouth and nibble on it. Hardly feels his ( Read more... )

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etherealflaim February 25 2008, 06:20:35 UTC
Aww, Michael! I just want to hold him and comfort him! This is so beautifully (darkly) written! I wish I could write dark... but as has been pointed out before, I take very obviously dark pairings (Linc/Susan) and don't write them dark. Oh well. You do it beautifully, I couldn't even begin to write something comparing to this. Thanks so much!
~EF

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its_chase February 25 2008, 06:25:28 UTC
I know, right? He's just so...torn up. It's heartbreaking. I'm thrilled that you think it turned out so good. I actually don't think I've gotten a more glorious review than this one before. And if you keep downing your darkness, I'm going to have to beat you with my Stick of Darkness...that I just invented.

And thank you for the comment!

Aaand p.s. If you're trying to sweet talk me or stroke my ego, you've massively succeeded. =D

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