[Mini-Series] Undeniable Sin - Part 04

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Here it is. It's not great, but for some reason I had the toughest time write thing scene, I don't know why. I dislike it, but I'm overly judgmental and horribly critical of myself. Therefore, I hope you enjoy it!

I apologize for how long it's taken to write this.

Enjoy!

Title: Undeniable Sin
Pairing: Yoochun/Changmin
Genre: Angst, Drama
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[nivani]

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Oh no. It's sooo not good.

[nivani]

me being up before 6am without coffee or what?

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without coffee oh... that can't possibly be good ^.~

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Thank you my dear (:

Incest is bad bad bad! But I'm glad despite that, you're still enjoying it XD

[gompi]

But then Changmin talks again and it's deep and penetrating, "Stop needing you?" he asks him. "Stop wanting you?"

Yoochun turns around, afraid to look into his eyes.

He can hear him moving closer again. "You want me to stop loving you?" he questions softly.

Yoochun's blood runs hot through his body, his skin tingling, it messes with his head and he stumbles a bit on jelly legs to move away but Changmin's so close it feels like an invisible rope pulling him closer. "Don't say that."

oh you! you killed me

Because he wants to stay, even if it’s the last time.

♥ this is beautiful bb ((:

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Thank you my darling!! XD

Didn't think I would actually get this out.

[be_ddelusionall]

Oh my god this is sooooooo good. It's just ... ... ... just ... ... I think i've read your first three chapters at least 8 times waiting for you to update this, and omg it's soooooooo awesome.

Please hurry with more. Please. *begs you*

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♥

Oh thank you so much!! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! I hope I will continue to make it enjoyable for you!!

And I'm definitely going to try and get more out in a lot less time. (:

[pawshingo]

Oh mannnn! Changmin can be so persuasive whether he's doing it intentionally or not! He's begging, pleading so much that you've to be made out of stone not to give in! He keeps going round and round Yoochun until he finally gives in. So what now? There's only the 2 of them at home. Logically Yoochun should have left, fled with whatever sanity that's left in him or even 'hid' behind YunJae (smart Yunho and cute Jae) but of course we all WANT Yoochun to stay, even it's for the last time *I can just imagine Min's soulful gaze towards Yoochun....* Tq so much for updating!!!!!

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Yoochun knows he should've left, it would've been the wisest choice, but he's always given into Changmin, that little rascal XD

I'm glad you are enjoying it! XD