[Mini-Series] Undeniable Sin - Part 03

Oct 24, 2009 01:02

Disclaimer: So I've been thinking about it and I think it's important to mention that there are some religious aspects in this chapter, and for that reason I feel like I should have some form of disclaimer. It is not my intent to offend anyone with this story.

Title: Undeniable Sin
Pairing: Yoochun/Changmin
Genre: Angst, Drama
Rating: R
Warnings: ( Read more... )

genre: drama, rating: r, pairing: yoochun/changmin, story type: au, series: undeniable sin, length: mini-series, genre: angst

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ephemeral_blue October 24 2009, 08:28:40 UTC
gompi October 24 2009, 17:35:34 UTC
as much as i want to quote everything

Yoochun grabs an overnight bag and some clothes to cover the rest of the week. He finds his slippers and sneakers buried under a mountain of dirty laundry and slips in a couple handfuls of socks and underwear. He slides the drawer closed quietly pausing when he hears a soft noise from the bed, he looks over his shoulder and Changmin rolls onto his side, pulling his shirt up and exposing the most delicious slice of tan skin that leaves Yoochun's knees buckled where he stands ( ... )

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nivani October 24 2009, 08:30:03 UTC
haha, I'm to forever be second in this then XD
SPOT XD

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ephemeral_blue October 24 2009, 08:31:02 UTC
I'm sorry my dear!! I promised her first spot always for this fic :D

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nivani October 24 2009, 09:07:51 UTC
it hurts so good bb ♥

you know, you made me think with this series (yes, it happens ocassionally) and it's all surprisingly serious. started with the thought, that even though I am (probably too) liberal, I rarely read controversial stuff like that, just because people don't (try to) understand how hard it in fact is. I don't expect them to know or imagine how it'd feel, because there's no way they would unless they found themselves in such situation BUT at least aknowledge the fact that it's not sunshine and rainbows. it continues in such a fasion until I came to a conslusion, that I don't think I'll ever be ready to be a mother o.O I'm not even trying to type my trail of thoughts for you ^^;;

but, for the first time (I think), I fully approve of the angst, and just love you more. it must be hard to write.

it makes me cry nonetheless

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ephemeral_blue October 24 2009, 09:45:05 UTC
You know, when I originally started writing this the first thoughts that came into my mind where the religious aspects of sin. I'm not currently a practicing member of any religion and I find myself far too liberal in thought and action but the ideals of my religion are always there in the back of my mind and ready to spring forward when they need to ( ... )

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whosthat October 24 2009, 09:16:56 UTC
;________; Yoochun.

But well. -shrugs- Junsu's a really awesome friend, btw. I like him too, hahahah. xD

Yoochun doesn't have to inform his parents about him leaving?

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ephemeral_blue October 24 2009, 09:50:42 UTC
Junsu is definitely awesome :D For some reason I love his position as a good friend in my fics lol.

Yoochun will be informing his parents in the next chapter :) He just needed to get out before Changmin tried to use his magic on him lol.

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whosthat October 24 2009, 09:59:07 UTC
Junsu is the perfect role for best friends wahahah. :D

It just seemed weird cos the parents were there when he entered the house and then... he just ran out to escape from Changmin and they didn't say anything to him?

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ephemeral_blue October 24 2009, 10:06:19 UTC
He totally is. :D

You make an excellent point!! I made an adjustment lol

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amouralamer October 24 2009, 09:38:06 UTC
I got on looking to see if you had updated and there you were!^^ I hope there are many chapters to come.

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ephemeral_blue October 24 2009, 09:51:43 UTC
Thank you and thank you for reading!!

There will definitely be more chapters to come :D

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allysonmae18 October 24 2009, 11:24:06 UTC
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!
know what I'm sick right now.. But this made me feel better! Thank You!!;)

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ephemeral_blue October 25 2009, 01:22:06 UTC
Oh my dear, I hope you get better soon!! Please take care of yourself :D

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