Comments | ithildyn: 'On A Raven's Wing' (06/07)

ithildyn

'On A Raven's Wing' (06/07)

May 21, 2009 23:32

After a brief hiatus, the story is back. One more part to go after this -- the end is nigh! Vin was very chatty tonight!

Rating: PG15 for adult situations.
Notes: 3:10 To Yuma/Magnificent Seven/Highlander, a story in the ' Echoes the Sea' AU series, Ben Wade/OFC. This exists entirely due to the repetitive poking efforts of ninjababe and her posse. This ( Read more... )

fic: magnificent seven, fic: highlander, charlotte sparrow, fic: xover/au, fic: 3:10 to yuma, series: 'echoes the sea', vin tanner, oren travis, ezra standish, fic, ben wade, chris larabee

Comments 10

grachonok May 22 2009, 05:50:49 UTC

Good way to start the day, thank you!:).

Love Vin and wait for the last part:)!

ithildyn May 22 2009, 06:16:49 UTC

You're welcome! Vin was just full of beans tonight. Ezra get his turn next.

bookaddict43 May 22 2009, 10:10:34 UTC

Yay Vin! I like his conversation with Ben and the way he blackmails Charlotte. You do the flashbacks so well! I like how Charlotte's love for the children comes through so clearly in both periods.

ithildyn May 22 2009, 17:24:29 UTC

Vin was downright surprising in how much he wanted to be front and center [g] I had fun writing him, cheeky little beggar! In the movie, Ben says he's been to Yuma, and escaped, twice, so it seemed obvious that one of those times, he was captured by Vin.

Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading :)

caitymom May 23 2009, 03:34:44 UTC

Vin is very front and center in this fic
(and very protective of Charlotte).
To get this much dialog from him I'd say
someone promised him pie! hmm, wonder who
would do such a thing? ;)

Loved this new chapter.
Can't wait for the next one.
Hugs you and squeezes you, too. :D

ithildyn May 24 2009, 06:45:58 UTC

Vin was extraordinarily chatty! No idea where he came from but he took over this part.

Glad you enjoyed it!

tpena19 May 23 2009, 04:29:16 UTC

Love how Ezra was interwoven throughout the chapter, shows how important he is to Charlotte and Vin. Gotta love a cheeky Ez influenced Vin too :)

ithildyn May 24 2009, 06:46:41 UTC

Ezra is a bad influence all around [g]

Thanks for reading :)

strangevisitor7 May 23 2009, 08:09:22 UTC

Great Vin Ben conversation - just terrific. Love VIn blackmailing Charlotte - he is spending entirely too much time with Ezra and now he's keeping secrets for Charlotte too. [g]

ithildyn May 24 2009, 06:48:01 UTC

Vin is a good friend. I did enjoy the interaction between Ben and Vin a great deal.