Eyeball Request
Okay, so I have about 2300 hundred words on part two of 'Practical Applications' done. I'm at a scene break. I have been tweaking and fiddling with it for two days, and I've made Nin look at it so many times, she needs new eyeballs too [g] Anyone who is familiar with Iron Man/Tony Stark be willing to just give it a quick read through and to see if Tony's voice sounds right and if the story more or less holds together? Otherwise, I'll keep tinkering and tweaking to no good effect and never get this story finished.