Odd timing, because I was rereading a commentary I did from 2007 only yesterday, and thinking it was a fun meme! Except back then, it was the entire story. This might be more manageable.
Pillaged from
gryphonrhi Pick any passage of 500 words or less from any story I've written, and comment to this post with that selection. I will then give you the equivalent of a DVD commentary on that snippet: what I was thinking when I wrote it, why I wrote it in the first place, what's going on in the character's heads, why I chose certain words, what this moment means in the context of the rest of the fic, lots of awful puns, and anything else that you’d expect to find on a DVD commentary track.
(I reserve the right to say: I have no idea what I was thinking. I also reserve the right to go, "No, really, I wrote that? What's it from?")