[COMPLETED Fic] "Itachi x Naruto" I'm Not The Man You Love

[morbidvixxen]

Author's Note: Please Read: So, this is a oneshot I wrote back in 2007. Yes. 2007. It is now 2009. It has been two freaking years. Don't judge me too hard on these stories, cuz they're all old. I was in my prime in 2007. ;D hahaha, jkkkk. But seriously. Read. Enjoy. Don't be too mean, please, my writing has gotten better. I SWEARRR. <3 -

Comments

[shattered_jouka]

whoa...just...damn

[laitsah]

The transition was beautiful, but also...I can't think of the term. Jagged? It didn't flow at some points. It took me a while to realize that the scene was in the past.

It was intense at points that I did like. You thoroughly brought release from suspense at points, but at the same time, there was always enough suspense to keep us going. (Lol, that sounds dirty.)

Some descriptions were unnecessary and awkward, though.

Overall, I give it an 8/10. Good job!

[iloveitasasu]

"His cutthroat lover's face." Does that mean that Sasuke is dead? And does Naruto loves Sasuke the way Sasuke loved him? Very good fic. :)