poems?
[mood| 
frustrated ]
reading some of mere's poems/writings inspired me to write some things that were in my head down. i wrote 3 little things. if you read them please tell me what you think, since i suck at writing in general. ♥
1."a tyrant for a dad"
your wrong and i'm right.
no matter what you say.
besides all the evidence
you've gained.
sure you make look like me
and have the same name...
but it's my name & my looks.
you may live in the same house,
but it's mine too.
i control it & i control you.
so no matter what you say
or what you do.
i'm right.
your wrong.
2.untitled (any suggestions?)
you think your so special don't you.
you have parents, a house, friends, maybe even a boyfriend.
you even go to school.
but did you ever realize about someone else?
people who have nothing in this world?
i'm sure you didn't.
there are people out there who can't do anything to change their life.
but you just sit there and do nothing.
nothing but complain & waste your life.
go get out there and do something,
before its too late.
and it's time to regret.
3."what is beauty?"
beauty inspires obsession.
but why my beauty?
i mean how is fair skin beautiful?
my odd green eyes and dull brown hair,
that i can't do anything with.
and my rosy cheeks that i always try to hide.
and yet you still say,
"yes your beautiful."
and when i ask why in disbelief,
you say "everything."
then i thought,
that beauty isn't always about looks.
the end!♥
frustrated ]
reading some of mere's poems/writings inspired me to write some things that were in my head down. i wrote 3 little things. if you read them please tell me what you think, since i suck at writing in general. ♥
1."a tyrant for a dad"
your wrong and i'm right.
no matter what you say.
besides all the evidence
you've gained.
sure you make look like me
and have the same name...
but it's my name & my looks.
you may live in the same house,
but it's mine too.
i control it & i control you.
so no matter what you say
or what you do.
i'm right.
your wrong.
2.untitled (any suggestions?)
you think your so special don't you.
you have parents, a house, friends, maybe even a boyfriend.
you even go to school.
but did you ever realize about someone else?
people who have nothing in this world?
i'm sure you didn't.
there are people out there who can't do anything to change their life.
but you just sit there and do nothing.
nothing but complain & waste your life.
go get out there and do something,
before its too late.
and it's time to regret.
3."what is beauty?"
beauty inspires obsession.
but why my beauty?
i mean how is fair skin beautiful?
my odd green eyes and dull brown hair,
that i can't do anything with.
and my rosy cheeks that i always try to hide.
and yet you still say,
"yes your beautiful."
and when i ask why in disbelief,
you say "everything."
then i thought,
that beauty isn't always about looks.
the end!♥