Being Human: Being Cruel Was Such A Cool Thing To Do [Hal/Cutler]

Mar 30, 2012 22:46

Title: “Being Cruel Was Such a Cool Thing to Do”
Author: Shaitanah
Rating: PG-13
Timeline: post-Series 4 finale [SPOILERS]
Summary: Hal undergoes rehab. Tom helps. An old friend - not so much. [Hal/Cutler]
Disclaimer: Being Human belongs to Toby Whithouse and the BBC. Lullabies quoted in the text belong to their original authors. Title from “Teary ( Read more... )

s: lavender blue, being human, ch: alex millar, fanfiction, ch: nick cutler, slash, ch: hal yorke, p: hal/cutler, ch: tom mcnair, tv

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shirogiku March 31 2012, 12:57:05 UTC
What have you done to me?! *sobbing quietly until it's 2013 and there's more Hal*

There was Mycroft. I hadn't known there would be Mycroft making passes at Hal. Also, Hal and Cutler have the best convesations in the show. When Hal fell to his knees and Cutler made that disbelieving face... /FEELS "Keep the door closed"

I thought a fix-it fic was supposed to be only rainbows and sparkles :p

I love the fic))) You did a wonderful job with everyone. Tom was every inch an adorable puppy<3

"She took my history away from me!” such a Cutler thing to say.

Cutler was never the type to make long pauses, not unless he was afraid - and as long as Hal knew him, it was Hal himself Cutler was afraid of for the most part. <333

“Hal!” Cutler calls from the street. “Hal! Let your hair down!” He giggles and says irritably: “Oh, for the love of-! Ask me in!” LOOOL, I love how you write Cutler's jokes

“Do you know what the blackest day of my life was?” Cutler says conversationally. “There were three actually. First, you killed my wife. That hurt, ( ... )

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istne_pieklo March 31 2012, 13:15:38 UTC
Awwwww! *huuuugs* You finished it? T_T Now we can angst together! XDDDD
Mycroft was so creepy, wasn't he? O_o
I thought a fix-it fic was supposed to be only rainbows and sparkles Muhahahaha! Like you don't know me! XDDDDDD
I love how you write Cutler's jokes I love the fact that he makes them))) He keeps making funny references, which nobody actually understands. XDDD
I want him to be alive tooooo! T_T His death was so lame(((( But we didn't see him turn to dust, did we? He has to be alive!!! XDDD
Thank you so much for reading, sweetie! <333

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shirogiku March 31 2012, 14:01:49 UTC
Yup, finished it last night!

... I think I need a manual for Cutler, Nick Cutler's jokes XD


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istne_pieklo March 31 2012, 14:04:46 UTC
Join me in the land of total heartbreak! The author of the show has confirmed that Cutler was "proper dead"(( I refuse to acknowledge this and prefer to lie in this cheery land of my fix-it where he's alive and well)))))
Damn right, it's not fair! XDDD

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significantowl April 2 2012, 03:25:19 UTC
I loved this! I spent the whole time torn between being thrilled to see Cutler again, and worrying about the effect he would have in Hal. I love that he was deliciously devious :-)

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istne_pieklo April 2 2012, 06:33:47 UTC
Thank you very much! <3

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dune_master April 2 2012, 13:27:52 UTC
Wow, this is... something! You did a brilliant job, incorporating Alex and Tom and showing how his normal life clashes with his past life, which Cutler sort of brings back every time. The use of the lullabies is a great idea (and the lines really fit both of them well, highlighting certain aspects of their characters; I don't know if it's intentional but it's a great idea). The flower was creepy and painful, but the ending gives off this hopeful vibe. Looking forward to the sequel. :)

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tarteaucitron April 3 2012, 20:26:01 UTC
i found this on ao3, but i wanted to track you down and tell you how fabulous i think it is.

hal is a character who makes me feel vertiginous sometimes with that whole abyss of history behind him, and this was totally true to that - ugh, the lullabies, the beautifully queasy relationship with cutler - as well as the fragile, deceptively bumbling way that he exists with alex and tom. and cutler: “Hal! Let your hair down!” <3 your dialogue is nut-sweet and perfect - i shivered. i hope he plagiarises the fuck out of the flatshare.

so yes: i think this is fabulous.

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istne_pieklo April 3 2012, 20:47:51 UTC
Thank you so much! <3
Hal is incredibly interesting to write, I think)) His mood swings alone! XD
Cutler definitely needs to find himself room mates))) But it doesn't mean he has to stop hanging out with Hal and torturing him just by being there... which I why I'm writing a sequel. >_

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tarteaucitron April 3 2012, 22:20:33 UTC
hanging out with Hal and torturing him just by being there

yes yes! that pls! :D

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