Sherlock BBC: Onlookers [John, Sherlock]

Mar 18, 2012 00:06

Title: “Onlookers”
Author: Shaitanah
Rating: PG-13 (to be safe)
Timeline: non-linear throughout the entire series [spoilers for all aired episodes]
Summary: Living with Sherlock is like being a constant victim of a Halloween prank. [John, Sherlock; outsiders’ POV… sort of]
Disclaimer: Sherlock belongs to Steven Moffat, Mark Gatiss and the BBC.
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gen, ch: john watson, sherlock, ch: sherlock holmes, tv, fanfiction, challenge

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shirogiku March 17 2012, 21:15:02 UTC
You're good at this -- the Halloween mood, Sherlock's crazyness, the apple and the understated but piercing sadness.

... domestic bliss. Hahaha.

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istne_pieklo March 17 2012, 21:16:30 UTC
Thanks))) (Blame the apple on Jimmeh, though)))
Yeah, I totally suck at filling prompts. I twist them until they're unrecognizable. XDDD
Thanks for reading! <3

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shirogiku March 17 2012, 21:38:21 UTC
Jimmeh<3

I love your writing and I'm really happy we share more fandoms now :)

Also, this: Dean meets 'the Chief'

I loved this episode <3 the moral dilemma too.

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istne_pieklo March 17 2012, 22:00:52 UTC
Yup)))) <333
Aww, thank you! :))) And I'm very happy about it too. <3
I don't remember much from that ep, I've only seen it once (as opposed to some eps that I rewatched later), but it was good, I think)))

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fanbot March 17 2012, 21:44:08 UTC
Brilliant and melancholy.

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istne_pieklo March 17 2012, 22:01:18 UTC
Thank you! :)

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ladyheliotrope March 17 2012, 22:01:28 UTC
I read "There's a ghost in the mind palace" and I just literally said aloud, "Oooh!"

So good!

So so good!

Thanks for sharing!

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istne_pieklo March 17 2012, 22:04:13 UTC
I kind of like the idea that feelings and emotions are so alien to Sherlock that he would think of them as glitches. XDDD
Thank you so much for reading! :)

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transient_words March 18 2012, 00:36:04 UTC
This is sadder than expected, but beautiful (so not complaining at ALL). I love all your imagery here -- all those little allusions to Sherlock's drug habits, his craziness and ... yes, the post Reichenbach angst.

I'll review this later ... in more detail, but I really loved <3.

You do write a wonderful John. And Sherlock <3.

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istne_pieklo March 18 2012, 07:28:20 UTC
Sadder than you expected from me? XDDDD That's new))) I was under the impression that I'm physically incapable of writing anything other than brain-breaking angst (if you read SPN, you'd know XDDD).
Anyway, I just hope I didn't disappoint. XDD
Thanks for reading! :)

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goldvermilion87 March 18 2012, 02:19:53 UTC
This is gorgeous. The idea is so creative, and the execution is flawless.

I haven't read many Reichenbach-related fics that I don't find overly soppy. This was heartbreaking, but subtle enough to feel in character. Thank you for sharing!

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istne_pieklo March 18 2012, 07:29:45 UTC
Thank you! :) Not being deemed as soppy is always the best praise for me b/c such fics tire and bore me too. <333
Thanks for reading!

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