Kakashi/Sakura fic: Sans Direction (for darkelanor)

[istne_pieklo]

Title: “Sans Direction”

Author: Shaitanah

Rating: PG

Timeline: post-Shippuuden

Summary: Sakura wants to know what loneliness tastes like. Kakashi can’t help wondering why she’s chosen him. It’s funny how a few days can change lives. [Kakashi/Sakura]  Please R&R!

Disclaimer: Naruto belongs to Kishimoto Masashi. Title from Ramène Moi by San.Drine. This

Comments

[helike]

*__* Absolutely awesome. There is not that much I could write here, because what else could I say? That I love every single part of it?

Poor little girl... is it really necessary to know what real loneliness is? I know it and I would never recommend it to anyone ^^;

BTW... Is Naruto so down, because they didn't manage to find Sasuke?

[istne_pieklo]

*squee* THANK YOU!!!!!
Personally I believe no one should learn what loneliness is. It's a scary thing... But I always thought Sakura could feel a little out of place. Sasuke, Naruto, Kakashi, even Sai know what it feels like to lose smn. And she can't even compare her personal dramas to theirs. Like that dialogue with Sasuke from ep 3 (I think) where he said that "you can't even compare true loneliness to when your parents get mad at you".
And besides, if learning loneliness leads to kissing Kakashi, who would mind it?))))
Actually (I'll mention it later when I'm done with L,S) I kind of view this story as part of L,S universe - somewhere between the last chapter and the epilogue. So yeah, Naruto's depressed because of Sasuke))))) And this is the culmination of KakaSaku storyline in L,S as well))))

[helike]

You're giving away your plot a bit ;)

I think that in some way even Sakura knows some kind of loneliness... She was the kid that other kids make fun of because of her forehead. She was left alone by both Sasuke and Naruto... And in some way she still is alone as Naruto sees no one but Sasuke. And Sai... is just Sai.

LOL Wanted to say that Kakashi is too old... but then I realized that I must be somewhere around his age ;__; WTF?! Itachi would be almost 8 year younger than me ;__; He is in my students' age ;__;

[istne_pieklo]

I didn't say anything really important))) I can still turn things a different way))))
Even if this didn't fit L,S - Naruto is like always depressed because of Sasuke))))))))
Yes, I agree. But still, it was not the pain of losing someone or never having someone. She's a normal kid. And there's nothing wrong with that)))
He's what, 29? That's not old)))))) The scary thing is that we're getting older and our fav characters don't))))) Itachi is still older than I am, but Sasuke already isn't)))))) LOL!

[seneska]

Awh, this was sweet. Well done.

xx

[istne_pieklo]

Thanks! ^_^

[harpers_bizarre]

This was really enjoyable to read. It was very subtle, quite like their relationship. Wonderfully written.

And the Pablo Neruda excerpt at the beginning was lovely, too, as he is one of my favorite poets.

[istne_pieklo]

Thank you very much! ^_^
I love Neruda too! He's been a huge inspiration for many of my fics.