Word drabble: Bad Religion

[istne_pieklo]

Title: “Bad Religion”

Author: Shaitanah

Rating: PG-13

Summary: 13 very short drabbles (no more than a few sentences each) about Mello and his feelings and thoughts on L. (Spoilers for L and Mello’s real name)  Please R&R!

Disclaimer: Death Note belongs to Ohba Tsugumi and Obata Takeshi. Words taken from Random Word Generator.

A/N: Practicing short

Comments

[louder_louder]

Oh God oh God oh God oh God I love you.

These were gorgeous. All of them. They were just... oh. Ward in particular made me give an audible, "Ouch."

These were all painful and lovely and brilliant and wow. It aches. In the best way. ;o;

And yeah, the last one made me go kldslfnd Mello and Nearrrrr D':, just so you know.

[istne_pieklo]

*squee* THANK YOU!!!! To tell you the truth, I wasn't sure how these would work out. Like I said, I'm not friends with short drabbles))))
I'm so glad to know you liked them))) It's always awesome to receive such a comment from a fellow Mello fan)))))))))) ^___^

[helike]

Awesome XDD
Mello & Near are like Naruto and Sasuke in some way, aren't they? :)

[istne_pieklo]

Thanks! <3
Ha-ha-ha, yes))) Though Near lacks Sasuke's obsessions and Mello lacks Naruto's good side)))) He's more like Naruto-under-the-Kyuubi-influence, LOL))))

[helike]

AU!Sasuke and AU!Naruto then? :P

[istne_pieklo]

LOL)))))) Maybe... XDDD We've already determined that Near might be related to Uchiha. Maybe Mello's related to Namikaze/Uzumaki)))))

[ghostfriendly]

Nice pieces, some really good ideas, especially sharply, dubious, ward and physiology. This style is kind of interesting, because there's so many different ideas, but a bit of a theme.

[istne_pieklo]

Thank you! I've seen a few fics written in that style and always thought it was very difficult. Now that I started experimenting it doesn't seem that hard anymore, but it seemes all the more curios. Like a challenge))))

[dune_master]

Beautiful!

[istne_pieklo]

Gracias!)))