Back then they were just kids...

[istne_pieklo]

Title: “Square Sun”

Author: Shaitanah

Rating: G

Summary: Even ninjas can act awfully childish at times. Naruto and Sasuke in detention together back when they had thoughts and dreams to share. Please R&R!

Disclaimer: ‘Naruto’ belongs to Kishimoto Masashi.

A/N: Just a random idea that came to me yesterday. Takes place early in Season 1. May be

Comments

[joyinthedance]

I like this a lot. Your writing style is really good, and it's really in character. I could totally see that happening.

[istne_pieklo]

Thank you so much!

[hakuzosu]

Haha! I kicked teme's ass.

Good story'tebayo. Is it on ff.net, or only here?

[istne_pieklo]

Yep, totally! Though he wouldn't admit it. =D
Yeah, it is on ff.net, too. On my account under the name "Shaitanah"

[hakuzosu]

Sasuke-teme just can't admit I can beat his ass any day, no matter how strong he's gotten'tebayo.

I'll leave a review there too. ;D

[istne_pieklo]

Well, it's a big ego problem. His big ego. =D
Thank you!

[helike]

Good story ^^ I liked it a lot :)

[istne_pieklo]

Thank you very much!

[momoiro_usagi]

Awww, that was so cute! ♥ ♥ ♥ You really captured their interaction PERFECTLY, and I love your writing style, as well! It moved fast, and was really fun to read! Nice work!

[istne_pieklo]

Thank you! There was a moment when I was about to discard the idea of posting it at all, but it turned out better than I expected... ;)

[istne_pieklo]

Yeah, most of my ideas come from personal irratation))) Like I was wondering where the hell Sasuke got the white shirt with the Uchiha fan. And here's an explanation, and if you follow it, you'll see that he could whine Orochimaru into getting him one just because! =D
IC is cool! Even Naruto? That's what I'm worried about. But it seems that people like him...
I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it so. *hugs*