justprompts: Tell me a Secret

[isntthatwizard]

[OOC WARNING: AU, sort of shippy (Duplicate/Rose), very angsty, very dark. Read at your own risk.]

"You can't be here."

"Yet clearly I am. Maybe I just grew out of you telling me what I can be."

Comments

ooc

[handysparehand]

.......ohmygod!

This....just....I'm speechless. This is nothing short of absolutely amazing! This is just haunting and amazing and the imagery. I can't even think of the words to describe this, just...wow.

Re: ooc

[isntthatwizard]

I wasn't even aware there was imagery! It was intended for a sort of stream-of-consciousness piece. Or something. What was I writing? I have no idea. Who am I? Why is the sky blue?

I am glad to have stripped you of your words.

Re: ooc

[handysparehand]

Just the scene of him tearing the room apart, that I think was a big part of the imagery thing for me. Just that ripped wall paper, and the entire room torn apart. The image really stuck with me.

But yes. Words? What are these things? Strings of thought? Me? Incapable of after reading this story.

Re: ooc

[isntthatwizard]

Yeeaaaaah.... Dup!Doc needs some happy pills. No, wait, they tried that. I'm glad I could get some sort of imagery across, I really didn't do much with descriptions of surroundings. I think that ripped wallpaper line was the only thing outside of his head?

Eee! Your compliments though! They make me squee inside.

Re: ooc

[handysparehand]

Poor Dup!Doc. He really is so sad. But there were many mental images this story gave me, so you were very good with painting both his psyche and the scene. Like I loved him taking a deliberately long time in getting ready, because he knew he would be away from this life soon.

And yay, I love to make people squee. My compliments make you squee. Your story makes me flail. Nice trade-off, I think :)

Re: ooc

[isntthatwizard]

I'm glad someone thought so, you're discovering things about my writing I didn't even notice.

And it's a done deal. *handshake*