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Fic: Fallout - Part Seven (Jack/Sawyer)

Nov 29, 2007 17:57

Title: Fallout - Part Seven
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Until Sawyer wakes up, it’s just this. Just him, and Jack, and Sawyer’s big bed. Until Sawyer wakes up, the world is just about them.
Disclaimer: I do not own Lost. At all. I wish but alas...
Author's Note: This is the next part of my continuing Jack/Sawyer, post-apocalyptic AU saga. :) As per the ( Read more... )

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Comments 10

alemyrddin November 30 2007, 09:50:45 UTC

awww! ♥

I loved the J/S interaction (of course!) but also the meeting, you sketched each character very well.
I particularly loved Sayid being so practical and smart, and putting his skills at use.
And, next time, 'team sexy to the rescue'! yay!
:)

isis2015 November 30 2007, 19:20:29 UTC

Thanks. :) I'm really glad you liked this part.

janie_tangerine November 30 2007, 21:03:13 UTC

You know, I can't wait for Sawyer and Sayid to have that talk... you're keeping a great suspense here!

Anyway I loved this! The J/S interaction was great and your general characterization is just on the spot, while everything that happens here just looks very plausible in that kind of situation. Now I wanna know what happens next though ;)

isis2015 November 30 2007, 21:20:38 UTC

Well, thank you! :D That's lovely to hear. I'm glad you liked this part. Thanks for reading.

siluria November 30 2007, 21:20:43 UTC

His heart drowns out his head. Sawyer drowns out everything else.
I adore that last bit. Well I adore the entire fic, this part very much included in that, but that last line was just wonderful. More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

isis2015 November 30 2007, 21:35:00 UTC

Aw, that's sweet of you to say. Thank you! :D I'm glad you liked it. I'll try to have more up as soon as I can.

zelda_zee December 11 2007, 22:19:26 UTC

I'm finally all caught up again with your series - like I said at your other fic, I'm having a hard time staying on top of things!

This continues to be a fascinating yarn and I especially like the way you've fit all the characters into this strange, post-apocalyptic world. As I said before, making Sawyer the leader makes me happy and especially getting to see him exercise that leadership and see how he keeps control of the situation and all those strong personalities.

I was a bit confused about Jack and Sawyer and what they'd done since they slept together - of course, my mind always zips ahead, but then it seems they have only kissed, so I had to dial it back a few notches. I really love the last lines of this, they're quite perfect really.

I'm finding Kate interesting, since I usually don't really understand her. Your characterization is bringing her to life. And Sayid is so capable and... Sayid-like, you know how I love that!

Looking forward to seeing how the rescue pans out!

isis2015 December 11 2007, 22:36:00 UTC

This continues to be a fascinating yarn and I especially like the way you've fit all the characters into this strange, post-apocalyptic world. As I said before, making Sawyer the leader makes me happy and especially getting to see him exercise that leadership and see how he keeps control of the situation and all those strong personalities.

I really enjoy putting Sawyer in a leadership position and seeing how he reacts to everyone. He's still Sawyer, but there's a certain diplomacy to him. And everyone sort of respects him enough not to go to overboard with their opinions (even, to an admittedly lesser extent, Ana). I think he has a good head on his shoulders and that he can see quite a few steps down the road. I'm pleased that you're pleased with that. :)

I was a bit confused about Jack and Sawyer and what they'd done since they slept together - of course, my mind always zips ahead, but then it seems they have only kissed, so I had to dial it back a few notches. I really love the last lines of this, they're quite perfect really.Hee ( ... )

elise_509 December 13 2007, 20:53:16 UTC

I love how you've captured the essence of all these characters in the interaction at the meeting. Who they are really shines through in a very succinct way. I'm also a huge sucker for anything that opens up with Jack and Sawyer in bed and ends up with them making out. Hee. I'm totally digging this series, I'm interested in both where Jack&Sawyer are going as a couple and the overarcing plot of trying to rescue Claire. *loves*

isis2015 December 14 2007, 00:46:43 UTC

I'm also a huge sucker for anything that opens up with Jack and Sawyer in bed and ends up with them making out.

Who isn't? ;)

I'm glad you're interested in Claire too, because, as much as this is a Jack/Sawyer story, it's a really-plot heavy one. So, sometimes the relationship is on center-stage and sometimes it has to take a back-seat. I'm glad to know you're with the story either way.