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Fic: Fallout - Part Two (Jack/Sawyer)

Aug 31, 2007 18:25

Title: Fallout - Part Two
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Sawyer's only mission is to live through the day.
Disclaimer: I do not own Lost. At all. I wish but alas...
Author's Note: This is the next part of my continuing Jack/Sawyer, post-apocalyptic AU saga. :) Over all, this is a Jack/Sawyer story, but you’re going to have to bear with me because it’s ( Read more... )

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Comments 10

wild_force71 September 1 2007, 07:10:32 UTC

I like this. Very nice. ::Grins:: I'll be watching out for the next part!

isis2015 September 1 2007, 07:19:22 UTC

Thanks! :) That's nice to hear.

obreesprit September 1 2007, 15:18:53 UTC

This is a very interesting plot. I wonder what happened to everybody and I am looking forward to the tension between the guys as this thing grows. Can't wait for the next part!

isis2015 September 1 2007, 19:22:05 UTC

Thanks! :) I'm glad you liked it.

fosfomifira September 2 2007, 01:26:33 UTC

Yay, more of this series!

I love it that you out Sawyer in charge of his section of people here. It's so him refusing to go out of his way to stop people from doing something - he doesn't care, but deep down I feel that he wants people to be responsible and accountable for their actions, which isn't a bad idea, actually, considering we're dealing with adults here. I wish that we'd got to see more of him being the really reluctant leader on the show.

I'm intrigued by the world-building here. What happened that Jack's people think there's a plague above ground? Who are the ones attacking Sawyer's people?

Can't wait for part three.

isis2015 September 2 2007, 01:34:01 UTC

I love it that you out Sawyer in charge of his section of people here. It's so him refusing to go out of his way to stop people from doing something - he doesn't care, but deep down I feel that he wants people to be responsible and accountable for their actions, which isn't a bad idea, actually, considering we're dealing with adults here. I wish that we'd got to see more of him being the really reluctant leader on the show.I think that Sawyer was more than willing to help Michael, until he took off on his own to get Walt. At that point, it became Michael looking out for Michael and Sawyer looking out for Sawyer (and, also, the people he felt responsible to keep safe). Sawyer does believe that people need to responsible for themselves at a certain point, and if Michael didn't want his help, he didn't get it. Which, yes, when you're dealing with adults is reasonable. I understand why the others think that they should go after Michael, but, in a dangerous situation like this, Sawyer's way of thinking is probably the safer, more level- ( ... )

cynthia_arrow September 3 2007, 08:14:36 UTC

Interesting. I have sort of a kink for Sawyer in charge, and he seemed perfectly in character here--grousing and being damn realistic and pragmatic. And also not particualrly good at reassuring anyone. It's funny to see him fighting with Ana, because his leadership style seems a lot like hers--survival first, screw anyone who gets annoyed at that, because that's life.

I'm curious to see how it's all going to come together, but so far I love the strange new world you've built and how you've placed all the people in it--the hatch people vs. the hotel people, and the Others still lurking out there. I especially like how Jack becomes Henry Gale in this universe. It's also comforrting to know Michael and WALT! are just as annoying here as they were in our universe. ;)

isis2015 September 3 2007, 18:23:50 UTC

When I was trying to figure out who should be in charge of the people at the hotel, it really came down to Sawyer and Ana. I think that Sawyer won because, even in this universe, I can't see anyone respecting Ana enough to listen to her. She has another motivation in going after Michael, let's just say that, and Sawyer knows that. There's more of the dynamic between Sawyer and Ana to come, trust me. :)

I'm glad you're enjoying this, hun! It's been fun to write, so far, so we'll see where this journey takes us. ♥

edenbutterfly September 3 2007, 13:37:09 UTC

I'm sorry but I totally suck at leaving comments but I just have to leaf one: I love your story! You've created a very interesting plot (kind of addictive) and the writing is great! Can't wait to see what's next.

isis2015 September 3 2007, 18:08:06 UTC

Aw, thank you! :D That's nice of you to say. I'm glad you liked it. ♥