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odainath in isest_mei

{ while we drifted we were one }

Jul 23, 2010 21:17

while we drifted we were one
S5; river, eleven, river/doctor (dr who)
across time and space, you watch us run.

( story here )

pairing:river/doctor, doctor:eleven, river song, genre:drama, genre:romance, fanfiction:dr who

Comments 17

tiddlypom July 23 2010, 12:13:03 UTC

I like!

odainath July 24 2010, 04:14:05 UTC

I'm happy that you do! :D

toastweasel July 23 2010, 15:05:33 UTC

Brilliant! Simply brilliant! My favorite line was the one with them in the exploding TARDIS. XD

>>“Hi, honey, I'm home.”

River doesn't miss a beat.

“And what sort of time do you call this?”<<

odainath July 24 2010, 04:09:52 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! I wrote this in one hit and was really nervous about posting. I've never written Dr Who before but Doctor and River are just too good not to be written about. lol.

promethia_tenk July 23 2010, 16:57:17 UTC

Oh, I enjoyed this a good deal. Particularly the gentleness and hesitancy of all the new parts at the end. And the format of all these snapshots spread out over a long time works very nicely, it gives the whole thing a wistfulness.

odainath July 24 2010, 04:10:51 UTC

I'm glad you liked. I've done this sort of fic before but found this one quite difficult. The two have a bloody difficult relationship, and it's very difficult to write!

wickdstarcrunch July 23 2010, 17:47:51 UTC

This was so so good! I loved it!!

odainath July 24 2010, 04:11:22 UTC

I'm happy you liked it!

katiealice49 July 23 2010, 19:01:54 UTC

I like this even though I hate Dr. Who. The chemistry between them is really apparent. Well done - I'm tempted to watch a few episodes.

odainath July 24 2010, 04:12:20 UTC

*clutches throat - aghast*

You hate Dr Who?!?!?! I was never in love with it until River Song came along; before I was fairly ambivalent. Now I'm a die-hard River/Doctor shipper. lol.