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Fic: Siren's Call, Chloe/Oliver, PG

Feb 13, 2011 23:12

Fic: Siren’s Call.
Author: isdon_isgood9
Rating: PG 13+
Character/Pairing: Chloe/Oliver, Dinah, Lois.
Fictable prompt: #15 Queen Tower
Summary: What if Chloe had been there when Lois showed up in Siren?
Spoilers: 7.11 Siren.
Word Count: 1,896
A/N: So this has been wondering around my head for a while and I figure I should finally write it. So I ( Read more... )

fic: siren's call, pairing: chloe/oliver, smallville: fanfiction, fictable

Comments 12

luminare91 February 13 2011, 13:58:03 UTC

That was perfect. I loved Lois going on and on while they were tied up and realizing in about two seconds that Oliver was in love with Chloe. Absolutely priceless.

isdon_isgood9 February 14 2011, 02:29:52 UTC

Thank you. I've never had anyone tell me something I've written is perfect before, so I gotta admit that makes me feel a little weird :D.

Well that's what Lois seemed to do in the episode so I figured she should just do that and slip the fact she knows Ollie loves Chloe.

Anyway thank you for commenting, it made my day :D

luminare91 February 14 2011, 17:33:47 UTC

well i don't say it if i don't mean it. i totally agree that Lois knew in the episode that she and Oliver were over. you did an amazing job with the characters. i can't wait to read more from you.

isdon_isgood9 February 16 2011, 01:42:56 UTC

I'm not saying you're lying it's just a bit of a shock seeing as no one has ever said that before. It just freaked me out a bit. Of course it jump started my muse so that's a good thing :D

Thanks, I'm working on the more :D

elidear February 13 2011, 14:58:28 UTC

Great story! I always enjoy reading stories were you can change one detail and make a whole new Smallville. I like how you had Chloe be there and it just escalates and of course the whole Oliver coming back to her eventually. I loved it! Would love to read more.:)

isdon_isgood9 February 14 2011, 02:33:43 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you think so. Fics that change one detail about canon and change the whole storyline are my favourites too, it's probably why I've written quite a few.

As for more, I don't know, I've haven't really thought about it. Then again Sunday nights seem to inspire me to write (cause Smallville's on channel 11), so you never know. I'll have to think about it :D

Thank you for commenting though. It made my day :D

bogusbabe February 14 2011, 03:23:07 UTC

THIS! This is how the episode should have been! But the Smallville PTB were too blind to see that Chloe and Oliver are perfect for each other that we had to wait how ever many more seasons for them to finally see.

Love it! :)

isdon_isgood9 February 16 2011, 00:27:48 UTC

I know, that's why I wrote it :D Of course I feel like I was as blind as the PTB cause I didn't even think about it til I saw Hex then when I rewatched season 6 and 7 I was like, 'How could I not see this before?'

Anyway thank you for commenting, I'm glad you liked it :D

saurina February 14 2011, 14:36:34 UTC

Yay I loved your take on Siren! Chloe should definitely have been part of it..;))

isdon_isgood9 February 15 2011, 23:58:05 UTC

Yay thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for commenting :D

brittany2922 February 15 2011, 17:36:42 UTC

Why is it fanfic writers always to it so much better then TPTB?! Awesome take on Siren, I loved it! =)

isdon_isgood9 February 16 2011, 00:01:20 UTC

Fanfic is always better because you can do whatever you want to do with the characters and if it doesn't feel in character we get class it as AU but the writers have to stay as true to the characters as they can. At least that's the theory :D

And thank you I'm gald you enjoyed it :D