Comments | isdon_isgood9: Fic: Start Over (3/?), PG, Chloe/Oliver

isdon_isgood9

Fic: Start Over (3/?), PG, Chloe/Oliver

Aug 19, 2010 22:30

Fic: Start Over (3/?)

Rating: PG (may be subject to change)

Summary: What if Oliver had been a supporter of Senator Kent from the very beginning of his campaign?

Character/Pairing: Oliver/Chloe, Clark, Lois, Martha, Jonathon.

Spoilers: 5.12. Some parts of the episode have been changed. When Clark rewinds the day again it will be the scene were Oliver’s ( Read more... )

smallville: fanfiction, fic: start over

Comments 10

slytherinpunk August 19 2010, 12:54:25 UTC

I really love that you kept the Clark going back in time and saving Lana's life and unknowingly causing his father's death.

I'm interested to see how this affects Oliver, and Mrs. Kent.

And the Chlollie interaction was adorable! Nicely done. =)

isdon_isgood9 September 1 2010, 10:55:39 UTC

I just realised I forgot to reply to this, whoops : )

I'm glad you like that I kept Lana alive cause I did consider killing her for a moment : )

Sadly there are no affects in the next chapter (just to keep with the continuity of the story) but there will be some in part 5, I know I have it planned : )

Anyway, thanks for the comment, as always and I'm glad you enjoyed.

brittany2922 August 19 2010, 21:09:09 UTC

I really like this story! It's such a fun read! I'm excited to see what comes next.

isdon_isgood9 August 23 2010, 09:12:06 UTC

Thank you, I'm really glad that you're enjoying this story : )

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isdon_isgood9 August 23 2010, 11:39:53 UTC

Thanks for the comment. I think that Jonathon's death was a shock to most people, me included.

Hopefully the next chapter should be up soon : ) I quite enjoy writing the interactions between Chloe and Oliver.

Thanks so much for your comment again : )

sxymami0909 August 20 2010, 03:21:15 UTC

Great job with this! i finally had a chance to read it yay! Nice chapter and I liek how you kept with the continuity of the Ep. Can't wait to see where you take it :-)

isdon_isgood9 August 24 2010, 08:49:13 UTC

Thanks for your comment, I'm gald you liked it. I'm trying to keep as much continuity as much as possible, it's more of slotting Ollie into the season 5 storylines.

Anyway thanks again and I'll update as soon as I can : )

chlavis333 August 21 2010, 02:54:26 UTC

Great fic so far! update soon!

isdon_isgood9 August 23 2010, 12:06:48 UTC

Thank you I'm glad you're liking it : ) I plan to update as soon as possible.