Fic: Dinner on Mars, (Logan/Veronica, Keith), PG

[isdon_isgood9]

Fic: Dinner on Mars

Author: isdon_isgood9

Rating: PG

Summary: What if Veronica had let Logan speak when they had dinner with her dad?

Spoilers: mild 3.04, nothing to major

Disclaimer: Sadly I in no way own Veronica Mars. It’s sad, but it’s the truth.

A/N: this is for round 10’s word table challenge for vmfic_gameon. I used 20 out of the 25 words (mythological,

Comments

[love_is_epic]

He also knew what that shirt did to her and that was most likely why he wore it.

^ and what it does to me and every other fangirl out there. Hee! *fans self*

I really enjoyed reading this, Don! So sweet! I do think the conversation would have went just fine between Keith and Logan if Veronica would have just let him answer. I'm glad you wrote this so we can dream about the 'what if.'

Great job!

[rowanceleste]

*nods* I loved it and I do agree the conversation would have went fine because Logan wanted Keith to like/love him as much as Veronica wanted her Dad to like/love Logan, but she just didn't have enough perspective to realize that and it's not like Logan is just going to flat out say he wants Keith to love him too. Heh.

[isdon_isgood9]

Thank you I'm glad you loved it. And I agree, the conversation wouldn't have gone badly if Veronica had just let it happen.

Thank you for commenting :D

[isdon_isgood9]

Thank you, I've very glad thta you like it. I've been dying to write this since I saw the scene and now I finally have the time I did : )

Thanks for commenting I'm really glad you liked it.

P.S. I think the costume designers dressed Logan the way they did cause of the recation of fan girls :D

[sanya4]

That's exactly how I imagine that dinner scene happening, if only Veronica hadn't interfered. The dialogue between Veronica and Logan outside the door was so cute and sweet. The way you wrote this fic it reads just like an alternative scene. And it would have been a much better choice than the one we got on the show.

Great job, Don!

[isdon_isgood9]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. I actually wrote it so it was like an alternative scene, you just take out the version from the show anc put my fic in : )

Thanks for commenting

[isdon_isgood9]

Thank you and thanks for commenting : )

[spygrrl76]

Love it! I wish that is how the conversation had actually gone. :) You captured Logan's combination of charming and naughty school boy perfectly. lol As well as Veronica's nervousness and ill ease. :)

[isdon_isgood9]

Thank you and thank you for commenting.

[cake]

I love this! :D

You really captured the character's personalities perfectly! I just wish this scene was longer on the show...they rushed it.

[isdon_isgood9]

Thank you, I'm very glad you liked it :D