Comments | isdon_isgood9: Fic: Judgement, Logan, PG

isdon_isgood9

Fic: Judgement, Logan, PG

Jan 28, 2010 15:07

Title: Judgement.
Author: isdon_isgood9
Rating: PG
Summary: Logan finally makes good on a promise to his father...
Spoilers: Do you know that Lilly died, that Logan was getting abused by Aaron, that Veronica and Logan dated the summer before senior year? If you know all this feel free to exile everything else you know about Veronica Mars for the ( Read more... )

vmfic_gameon, fic: judgment, veronica mars: fan fiction

Comments 5

celtic_flicka January 28 2010, 04:47:19 UTC

Nice work, Don! You are definitely improving with every fic you write. :)

I like the details you changed and your reasons for doing so (especially Wallace and Logan being buds--the line about Logan treating him "like the traitor that he was" made me laugh).

isdon_isgood9 February 1 2010, 03:51:00 UTC

Thank you. I am trying to improve so I'm glad it's starting to show. Anyway thanks for the comment.

sanya4 January 29 2010, 18:23:39 UTC

This was a really great AU fic!

I liked that even though they weren't together, Veronica still came to help and mostly support Logan. And I loved that Logan and Wallace were good friends, because I really feel that they should have gone in that direction on the show.

The naming of the belts was a great idea, and something I can imagine Logan actually doing.

A job well done! :)

isdon_isgood9 February 1 2010, 12:54:59 UTC

Thank you!

It seemed like a Veronica thing to do even though they weren't together and I think show would have gone in the direction of having Logan and Wallace as good friends if they paid more attention to those sorts of things in season 3.

And thank you again for your wonderful comment! (And sorry it took so long ot reply to it :))

metchick01 March 8 2010, 13:10:59 UTC

Awesome AU fic... Back in the day (before we knew Aaron was the killer) I always wanted to see more Logan leaving home fics. And it had my favorite Logan/Wallace friendship!

Great Job!