Once upon a game of mini golf, (LoVe), PG

[isdon_isgood9]

Fic: Once upon a game of Mini Golf
Rating: PG
Word Count: 945
Spoilers: As long as you know LoVe broke up in the summer between season 1 and 2. This takes place just before Veronica would have gotten together with Duncan in the canon.
Summary: It always starts with a game of mini golf.
Author’s note: This is written for spikeshunny on vm_santa gift. Also

Comments

[tiguhgirl]

Great little fluffy L/V story :)

Just a few errors that need to be fixed though (sorry, it's the teacher in me):

“You’re on fire. Oh my God, no care one cares enough to put it out,” Veronica with her own grin and head tilt.

It should be "no one cares enough to put it out"

“Well you what they say when you assume things.” Veronica replied

It should be "Well you know what they say..."

Otherwise, great job! :)

[isdon_isgood9]

Correct away. I'll even admit I like it when people do that, proves I'm human.

Anyway, other than that, thanks for the comment is greatly appreciated

[sanya4]

Very nice! I love reading snarky (with a little obligatory angst thrown in ;D) LoVe fics.

That's what makes me smoking hot
Truer words have never been spoken :)

Thanks for sharing!

[isdon_isgood9]

Thanks for commenting. It brigthened up my day.

[spikeshunny]

Turning back to Veronica he said, “And that’s not the only hole I can get the first time.”

Oh my Logan you certainly know how to win the ladies ! I &hearts this what an excellent job you did xxxx

THANK YOU !!!!!!!!!

[isdon_isgood9]

YEAH!! I'm so glad you liked it. I must tell you I was a little nervous in posting it cause you didn't say which season you wanted for your LoVe reunion so I just guessed.

[celtic_flicka]

Some excellent pre-kiss snark here, Don! So sweet and fun.

[isdon_isgood9]

Thank you, thank you very much.