thispoemmightbenotbadbecausethosearentmetaphors

[irregular_luvr]

walk homemy arms are swinging nooses

Comments

[ceci_suffit]

there is so very much stuffed into so few words
it is very nice
(then there's a face where i cover my top lip with my bottom lip and smile)

[irregular_luvr]

haha i had to follow your directions and make that face myself so that i could figure out what it looked like and after completed i immediately started laughing. it was a good thing.

i think it would be cool if [when i wasnt doing jewish stuff] some cool kids got together and called that cool kid lauren i think that would be cool

[xbrennerx]

i did the exact same thing to make that face and laugh

[xbrennerx]

i like your poems
i hope you most them more often

[irregular_luvr]

aw thank you i mosted it despite how i thought no one would read it probably but that makes me happy maybe i'll most more mater