WIP: You Can Leave Your Hat On [1/?] (PG-13) Logan, cast of BtVS

Mar 18, 2006 20:56

It was only their second date, but Logan thought what the hell? and decided to go for second base. Well, he had decided, but never actually acted on it since some psycho had fucking jumped on him. Yeah, it was as crazy as it sounded.

“What the HELL?” Thank God, the guy was a terrible thief or something, because he sure hurt himself more than Logan ( Read more... )

btvs, pg-13, logan

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blue_icy_rose March 18 2006, 19:47:58 UTC
Bwah! I saw WIP at the top of this! *does a happy dance* Hee!

Anyway, you already know that I love this, but I'll tell you again anyway. I love this. It's funny from the beginning (Logan's referring to Veronica as she-who-shall-not-be-named just made me think "Wow. He puts her on the same level as Voldemort!" Yes...I'm a dork. ~_^) It's also very in character from Cordelia's "What are you doing, you retard?" to that last line of Xander's. Which still keeps me laughing.

So anyway, I'm happy that you decided to continue with this because you've got me all curious about what's going to happen next. Not to mention that I want to see the characters' reactions to other situations in Neptune. Like Cordelia, Buffy and Willow meeting Veronica for the first time? Fireworks, I'm sure since they seem to be getting along really well with Logan and at the moment, Veronica's relationship with Logan is shaky at best. Plus, there'll be more banter! More snark! How can it not be loved?

Okay, so now's the part where I just stop babbling. LOL. Before I end this though, I like the title you decided on! Much better than what I was able to come up with. *nods* Now, I'll just wait and look forward to seeing what happens next.

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irmak March 18 2006, 20:24:16 UTC
Heee. You made me do this. You know what this means, right? You have to read and beta AGAIN. *twirls moustache*

Awww, you're a dork. I'm a dork, too. :) Thanks for the kind words, sweetie. I was kinda worried that it wasn't as funny as I thought it was *winks*, but you just cleared that for me. You're awesome.

Heee. So I'm waiting for ideas here. I'll send you an e-mail about some plotlines and you can help me along, right?

Oooh, the title! Totally stole that from The Full Monty soundtrack! Heee! It was at the last scene. ;)

Thank you for everything, hon! *hugs and kisses* :)

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