Especially In My Life.
http://www.ficwad.com/viewstory.php?sid=25711 I dunno if I'd be able to put the re-writes on ff.net, seeing as they'll say: "MULTIPLE INSTANCES SAME STORY TEH BAN" instead of thinking: "Oh. Rewrite. I suppose that's reasonable." So huzzah for shoving the rewrite in a crevasse somewhere in casa carajo. I mean, hooray for ficwad and its six Harvest Moon fanfics.
Anyway, the chapter's even a bit retooled from the lj version. And Makoto eats a sandwich gone bad and LIKES IT, because he's MAD HARDCORE.