This was fantastic, truly. I like always-a-girl!Brendon fics, and I loved your girl characterization of her. The relationship between her and Jon, and then the others, unfolded naturally and believably. So basically, I loved it.
Thanks! I loved the idea that she loves all of them (even Brent!) but that she'd never mess with what they've got without more than a little encouragement. And that she's just this flighty crazy person, she managed to survive on her own when she needed to, and she knows how to just *get through* whatever needs to be done. :)
This was really lovely. I love Jon and Bren's relationship and how you could tell Bren was also in love with her bandmates at the same time. Excellent story.
I didn't realize until I started writing it how much I wanted more Jon/Brendon/GSF in my life. It took over every other fic idea, and now it's stuck there. There are two categories of fic in my mental to-write list: more girl!Brendon and "other".
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Why, thank you!
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*ogles your icon for a moment*
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