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Carpe Diem - Two

Aug 20, 2007 14:55

Title: Carpe Diem
Author: ira_luxuria
Pairing: Eventually Frank x Gerard; Mikey x Connor (OMC); Ray x Bob
Word Count: 2,344
Rating: G.
Summary: It’s been ten years since Gerard last saw Frank and he’s been trying to keep his slightly crumbling life together for his own sanity
Disclaimer: The characters in this story, though based on stage personas/media ( Read more... )

frank iero, slash, carpe diem, gerard way

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anonymous August 20 2007, 18:54:13 UTC

the sex scene wasn't as shit as you claim it to be ( ... )

ira_luxuria August 20 2007, 18:56:22 UTC

Thanks.

Can you point out which exact bit was confusing so I can change it because I guess as is evident that I didn't have a beta. Please?

ira_luxuria August 20 2007, 19:03:21 UTC

I think I did it okay, I changed the majority of it to 'the stranger' despite the fact that a. It's obvious and b. it's annoying to make it a bit cleaer as to who is who.

anonymous August 20 2007, 22:15:06 UTC

yeah it's a lot clearer now.. maybe i was just having a major blonde moment.. :S

ira_luxuria August 21 2007, 12:09:09 UTC

No you weren't having a blonde moment I re read it and realised that it was confusing me too but thanks muchly for pointing it out.

ferardx4ever August 21 2007, 22:19:40 UTC

Hm, well ten years sure can change your face a hell of a lot.

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