The New Boy - Fourteen + Epilogue

[ira_luxuria]

Title: The New Boy
Author: ira_luxuria
Pairing: Frank x Gerard; Bob x Ray; Mikey x Connor (OMC)
Rating: Pg 13 - R
Summary: See title
Pov: First
Dedications: For faithfulriver26 and silencing_sam for being such avid readers and all the commenters. It helps a lot

Comments

[faithfulriver26]

this was coherent, promise.
its alright, crying just proves i have emotion, i figure that's a good thing.

wow, the flow really does show, it really created a finish that blew my mind, and had me screaming both at the computer and for more! i'm so glad you like my interpretation, we seem to really think alike :D oh man, if you do write a sequel, it will be so fucking intense. i mean, everything i mentioned aren't exactly happy things so the possible sequel would be insanely amazing and hard to read.
i think the first situation that popped into my head was them as adults. Gerard after what happened to him works as a detective for an SVU unit. Frank is well, his father. Gerard works a case that leads to Frank. horribly sad, there probably wouldn't be a good ending, but it seemed realistic to me. some people respond well to being part of something so horrible, which would lead to gerard trying to stop what happened to frank from happening to others by working as a detective for a special victims unit. and well, as it stated before, frank has become his father.
or gerard works as a prosecuter for frank's case and gets frank off on lighter charges because of his past.
anyway, that is my first thoughts on the situation, others include frank on the streets and gerard working, when their lives cross again. so general drug use, abuse, etc would be included
it doesn't sound stupid. i understand. something like that happens fast and the intial reation happens just as fast. pushing those who love frank away was not something that happened slowly that built up, it was an immediate defensive action. it had to happen that way. yeah, a happy ending, though wanted, wouldn't seem realistic or make much sense in this story.
it was a good finish

your welcome, i have absolutly loved this story
and thank you alice for all the comments we've made back and forth, i've really enjoyed discussing your story with you.

[ira_luxuria]

Short commnet. But I loved the firt idea about SVU I may do that actually lol it sounds awesome and would be fun to write.

Thank you and I've enjoyed discussing it with you too.

[faithfulriver26]

okay, so i just got back from a six hour car ride home, and i came up with two more ideas, i just wanted to share. one is they both meet again in jail, but they are in for different reasons.
and the other is gerard has a family and kids, and well, frank is hanging around too much, and gerard catches on to what is going on.
oh god, that would be a tough one to write.
anyway, i'm glad you liked my SVU idea, it just popped into my head when i saw the word sequel
anyway, feel free to use any of my ideas if you want!
your welcome and i'm so glad!

[ira_luxuria]

Six hours is long.
All your ideas are awesome but I'll let you in on a secret.
I was thinking that Frank's got a new 'lover' and Gerard is working at a local choclate shop (Don't ask I've been watching Chocolat) then eerything just leads from there but to be honest I like your SVU idea I might do that one.

[faithfulriver26]

yep, its across the state.
thanks.
and i love that movie.
hmm, i like your idea too!
well either way, i'm really looking forward to whatever you write.

[ira_luxuria]

Lol I'll think of something I always do xD

[faithfulriver26]

love that about ya!